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Hello Mr. [이름]! 

Well, what should I say?

People are not perfect and nobody is really perfect.
We all have our own flaws and it is up to us on how to make it right.
People are constantly greedy to have everything but it is also up to us on how to control it.

We just have to learn how to appreciate what we have in the moment and live with it.

If we want to have something, we just have to work hard for it and make no means of doing deceit or anything which is inappropriate just to have it.

Anyway, you have an in-depth thought basing from the way you composed it.

But I appreciate how you opened up on this topic.

Enjoy the rest of the weekend and see you on Monday!

Take care too!

Always,

Kathrine ^^

I appreciate my life.

>> correct!

And, I thank God (Jesus).

>> And I thank God for it.
I think that I am living with the grace of my God.

>>  I think that I am living by the grace of God.

I could not live without his grace.
>> I could not live without His grace.

I confess that I could not make my wealth by my power & strength.
>> I am aware that I could not make some money only through my power and strength.

When I wake up in the morning, I thank Jesus for my life, what I have.
>> When I wake up in the morning, I thank God for my life, and for what I have.

No doubt, human greed is endless, and me too.

>> No doubt that human greed is endless, and that is also true for me.

But, I am satisfied with my life.
>> correct!

The pope has been to Korea.

>> correct!

He is a great person and a medel how we live as a human being.

>> He is a great person and a good model/example on how e have to live as human beings.

All Korean was ecstatic about his speech, action & behavior.
>> All Koreans were ecstatic about his speech, action and behaviour.

When I look at my image in a mirror, I feel lacks of my humility, to serve others, honesty and etc.
>> When I look myself in the mirror, I feel the lack of being humble, serving others, being honest, etc.

How can I control my temper, selfish & haughtiness?

>> How can I control my temper, selfishness and naughtiness?

I would be a wantless man, if I could drive my heart in the right place.
>> I want to be a selfless person, if I could rive my heart into the right place.

I am not enough person.