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2014-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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My job is the mother I am the mother This decision may be no choice already. Soon to be born baby I'll be a good mother

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Hello there! Thanks for expressing yourself. You did great! You made better sentences to express your ideas. Anyway, I know that you are a good mother. ^^ And being a mother is a very hard job so I commend you for being  the best mother to your children. ^^ See you later! ~T. Jessie~ My job is the mother >> My job is being a mother. OR>> I am a mother.I am the mother >> I am a mother. OR>> I am the mother of my two children.This decision may be no choice already. >> I don\'t have any choice already.Soon to be born baby >> I will soon give birth of my baby.I\'ll be a good mother >> I\'ll be a good mother.

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