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학생이 쓴 원문
My job is the mother
I am the mother
This decision may be no choice already.
Soon to be born baby
I'll be a good mother
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thanks for expressing yourself.
You did great! You made better sentences to express your ideas.
Anyway, I know that you are a good mother. ^^
And being a mother is a very hard job so I commend you for being the best mother to your children. ^^
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
My job is the mother
>> My job is being a mother.
OR>> I am a mother.I am the mother
>> I am a mother.
OR>> I am the mother of my two children.This decision may be no choice already.
>> I don\'t have any choice already.Soon to be born baby
>> I will soon give birth of my baby.I\'ll be a good mother
>> I\'ll be a good mother.
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