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If you were an artist, what kind of artist would you be?
I would like to be a pianist. When I was young, I learned a piano, but I didin\'t like it. So I quited soon.
After I grow up, I regretted it. People who can plays a musical instrument are fascinating.
If I came back to my child, I would learn a piano for a long time.
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Hi, Ji [이름]! I think we have the same interest! I like to learn piano as well. But I think it\'s not yet too late to do it. You must try learning again!-Faith-
If you were an artist, what kind of artist would you be?
>> CORRECT
I would like to be a pianist.
I would like to be a pianist.
>> CORRECT
When I was young, I learned a piano, but I didin\'t like it. So I quited soon.
>> When I was young, I learned piano, but I didn\'t like it so I quit.
After I grow up, I regretted it.
>> CORRECT
OR When I grow up, I felt sorry about my decision.
People who can plays a musical instrument are fascinating.
>> People who can play a musical instrument are fascinating.
If I came back to my child, I would learn a piano for a long time.
If I came back to my child, I would learn a piano for a long time.
> If I came back to my childhood days, I would have learned piano for a long time.
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