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2013-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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I think International marriage is good, beacause some people marry with different state We can along with well ex:if we're country's people mary with some U.S.A's president, our country will be famous

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Hey there Alex! Thank you for sending me this composition of yours. I agree that International marriage is good as long as you understand and respect each other\'s culture, right?By the way, please go over my corrections below and study it. See you in class tomorrow. T. Rowena   I think International marriage is good,>>Correct! // I think International marriage is good. //beacause some people marry with different state>>Because some people can marry people with different races.We can along with well>>We can get along with each other well.ex:if we\'re country\'s people mary with some U.S.A\'s president,our country will be famous >>Example: If somebody from the other country marry the president of the U. S. our contry will become famous.

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