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What holidays have disappeared in your country? Why?
The tree-planting day(5th April) was a holiday but it has disappeared. First reason is that many people go to mountins to plant trees. So, there were a lot of fire on the day due to carelessness. Second reason is that working 5 days a week is getting common so the government thought there is many holidays in a year. So they omitted a that day from holiday from 2006. Anyway, we should have an interest in plant trees for our environment.
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Well said, Ji[이름]! Your thoughts were presented in an organized manner. It was cohesive! Keep it up!-Faith-
What holidays have disappeared in your country? Why?>> CORRECT
The tree-planting day(5th April) was a holiday but it has disappeared.
>> The tree-planting day(5th of April) was a holiday but it has disappeared.
First reason is that many people go to mountins to plant trees.
>> The first reason is that many people went to mountains to plant trees.
So, there were a lot of fire on the day due to carelessness.
>> So, there were a lot of fire incidents on that day due to carelessness.
Second reason is that working 5 days a week is getting common so the government thought there is many holidays in a year.
>> The second reason is that working five days a week is getting common so the government thought there were many holidays in a year already.
So they omitted a that day from holiday from 2006.
>> Thus, they omitted that as a holiday from 2006.
Anyway, we should have an interest in plant trees for our environment.
>> Anyway, we should have an interest in planting trees for our environment.
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