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Does prison help rehabilitate criminals? Should it?
I don\'t think prison help criminals rehabilitate. Actually I don\'t know the life in prison. However, I heard that many criminals don\'t stop committing crimes after releasing from prison. Only a few of criminals regret their crimes. Many criminals do the same or similar crimes and go to the prison again. I think the punishment should be much more strong to the criminals who commit the same crime again.
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Hello, Ji [이름]! Your answer sounds interesting. Hopefully, there could be better ways to rehabilitate them. See you!-Faith-
Does prison help rehabilitate criminals? Should it?>> CORRECT
I don\'t think prison help criminals rehabilitate.
>> I don\'t think prison helps rehabilitate criminals.
Actually I don\'t know the life in prison.
>> Actually, I don\'t know the life in prison.
However, I heard that many criminals don\'t stop committing crimes after releasing from prison.
>> However, I heard that many criminals don\'t stop committing crimes after releasing them from prison.
Only a few of criminals regret their crimes.
>> Only a few criminals regret their crimes.
Many criminals do the same or similar crimes and go to the prison again.
>> CORRECT
OR There are still many repeat offenders.
I think the punishment should be much more strong to the criminals who commit the same crime again.
>> I think the punishment should be much stronger to the criminals who commit the same crime again.
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