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Do you think being slim equals beautiful? Why or why not?
- I don\'t think being slim equals beautiful. Because slim body is different from healthy body.
I think healthy body is more beautiful. Muscleless slim bodies don\'t look like beautiful. That\'s why people work out and try to make muscle. Also I wannabe healthy body with some muscles instead of shinny body.
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You got it right! It is much better to be healthy in order to protect ourselves from diseases. Stay well!-Faith-
Do you think being slim equals beautiful? Why or why not?
>> CORRECT
- I don\'t think being slim equals beautiful. Because slim body is different from healthy body.
>> CORRECT
- I don\'t think being slim equals beautiful. Because slim body is different from healthy body.
>> I don\'t think being slim equals beautiful because a slim body is different from a healthy body.
I think healthy body is more beautiful.
>> I think a healthy body is more beautiful.
Muscleless slim bodies don\'t look like beautiful.
>> Muscleless slim bodies don\'t look beautiful.
That\'s why people work out and try to make muscle.
>> That\'s why, people work out and try to grow/build muscle.
Also I wannabe healthy body with some muscles instead of shinny body.
>> Also, I want to have a healthy body with some muscles instead of being skinny.
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