Home work(5.26)
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think tourism will harm the earth?
- Partially, I agree with it. I heard the news that Boracay beaches were closed for a while as tourisms destroy the beautiful beaches. Some tourisms threw trash away everywhere. We have a mandatory to keep our nature and historical monument. Many tourisms don\'t aware of it because they are noneducated. Home and school should teach why we should keep the earth.
강사 첨삭
Very well said, Ji[이름]! It\'s just so sad that many people ignore their responsibility for this world. But, let\'s not be discouraged to take care of it. Thank you!-Faith-
Do you think tourism will harm the earth?>> CORRECT
- Partially, I agree with it.
>> Partially, I agree on it.
I heard the news that Boracay beaches were closed for a while as tourisms destroy the beautiful beaches.
>> I heard the news that Boracay beaches were closed for a while as tourists destroyed its beauty.
Some tourisms threw trash away everywhere.
>> Some tourists threw their trash away everywhere.
We have a mandatory to keep our nature and historical monument.
>> There is a mandate to keep our nature and historical monument.
Many tourisms don\'t aware of it because they are noneducated.
>> Many tourists are not aware of it because they are uneducated.
Home and school should teach why we should keep the earth.
>> Home and school should teach why we should keep the Earth clean.
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