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2012-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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1,its coler is blue 2.it's very big elephent 3.I Played computer game at last weekend 4.The latest soccer game I Played is afternoon in this day 5.I will lose soccer game this weekend becouse opposing team is very good at soccer but my team is very not good at soccer. 6.My dog's snell is loose so my I gone my dog.

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Hi Alex! Welcome back! Thanks for doing your homework. Here are some corrections, check them properly. Have a good night. CIAO! ~Teacher Marie~ 1,its coler is blue >> Its color is blue.2.it\'s very big elephent >> It\'s a very big elephant.3.I Played computer game at last weekend >> I played a computer game last weekend.4.The latest soccer game I Played is afternoon in this day >> The latest soccer game that I played was this afternoon.5.I will lose soccer game this weekend becouse opposing team is very good at soccer but my team is very not good at soccer. >> I might lose in the soccer game this weekend because the opposing team is good and my team is not.6.My dog\'s snell is loose so my I gone my dog. >> My dog\'s smell is loose so I let go of it. *I don\'t really understand what you mean by this sentence. Please explain it in class tomorrow.

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