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Can you think of some disadvantages of being monolingual?
One of disadvantages is inconvenient when we are traveling oversea countries.
For example, while we are traveling other countries, sometimes we need to ask something for others.
If we are monolinguals, we can\'t talk with people who live there each other.When I traveled in Japan, màny bus or taxi drivers didn\'t know English. So I had some difficulty finding a location. Surely also Korea is not different.
In other words, we can\'t talk with people who is visiting in my country. We can\'t help them and give them information.
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Hello, Ji [이름]! It is really tough to travel to other countries without knowing their language or without knowing English. You are right, it\'s much better to be multilingual. I have to say that you are fortunate because you can speak English!
-Faith-
One of disadvantages is inconvenient when we are traveling oversea countries.>> One of the disadvantages is the inconvenience when we travel overseas.
For example, while we are traveling other countries, sometimes we need to ask something for others.
For example, while we are traveling other countries, sometimes we need to ask something for others.
>> For example, while we travel in other countries, sometimes we need to ask others about something.
If we are monolinguals, we can\'t talk with people who live there each other.
If we are monolinguals, we can\'t talk with people who live there each other.
>> If we are monolinguals, we can\'t talk with people who live there.
When I traveled in Japan, màny bus or taxi drivers didn\'t know English.
>> When I traveled in Japan, many bus or taxi drivers didn\'t know English.
So I had some difficulty finding a location. Surely also Korea is not different.
>> So, I had some difficulty finding a location.
Surely also Korea is not different.
>> Surely, also Korea is not different.
In other words, we can\'t talk with people who is visiting in my country.
In other words, we can\'t talk with people who is visiting in my country.
>> In other words, we can\'t talk with people who visit my country.
We can\'t help them and give them information.
>> CORRECT
OR We cannot offer them some help.
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