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2014-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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You're having lunch with three people you respect and admire. They all start criticizing a close friend of yours, not knowing she is your friend. The criticism is distasteful and unjustified. What do you do? - I will just listen what they talk about my friend at first until finish the table. (I know people is more sensitive when they are hungry) Having lunch, i will think over if their criticism is right or worse about my firend. If their thouhgts is right, I will be their man and i will critcize about my friend also. But If they are wrong, I will try to explain and make the unjustified criticism correct with big smile not to harm me and also i confess that she is my close firend. I hate those kind of people in fact. hihihihi

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Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! You\'re really back! I am so delighted to hear from you again! Thank you so much for coming back. Take care and talk with you later! T. JanE ^^ You\'re having lunch with three people you respect and admire. They all start criticizing a close friend of yours, not knowing she is your friend. The criticism is distasteful and unjustified. What do you do? >> Correct - I will just listen what they talk about my friend at first until finish the table. >> I will just listen to what they\'re saying about my friend.  (I know people is more sensitive when they are hungry)>> I know people are more sensitive when they are hungry.  Having lunch, i will think over if their criticism is right or worse about my firend. >> While having lunch, I will think about their criticism whether it\'s right or wrong.  If their thouhgts is right, I will be their man and i will critcize about my friend also.>> If they are right, I would be their man and I would criticize my friend, too.  But If they are wrong, I will try to explain and make the unjustified criticism correct with big smile not to harm me and also i confess that she is my close firend. >> But if they\'re wrong, I would try to explain and correct their unjust criticism with a big smile then I will tell them that she is my close friend.  I hate those kind of people in fact. hihihihi >> I hate those kinds of people in fact. 

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