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In not more than 10 sentences, write your thoughts about the following topic:
To what degree have you actually controlled the course your life has taken?
- Oh! I am sorry Jane~ I cannot understand the question completely.
I am very confused the word,'the course'.
Does it mean to what degree have i controlled my life?
Well, I think I have corolled my life more than 70%. I chose my job, my husband, my friends and Power english...
The reason I tell 70% is, unfortunately, I cannnot remember the time before I was 10 years old.
As you know I am 42 years old.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition! You got the question correctly. I believe 70% is good enough. As for me, I am responsible for the decisions I\'ve made in my life that have molded me into what I am now. However, there are some instances wherein I wasn\'t given any other good options. Nevertheless, I can say that I\'m happy with my life now.
T. JanE ^^
In not more than 10 sentences, write your thoughts about the following topic:To what degree have you actually controlled the course your life has taken?>> Correct - Oh! I am sorry Jane~
>> Correct
I cannot understand the question completely.>> Correct
I am very confused the word,\'the course\'.>> I am very confused with the phrase \"the course\".
Does it mean to what degree have I controlled my life? >> Correct
Well, I think I have corolled my life more than 70%.
>> Well, I think I have controlled my life for more than 70%. I chose my job, my husband, my friends and Power English... >> Correct
The reason I tell 70% is, unfortunately, I cannnot remember the time before I was 10 years old. >> The reason why I say it\'s 70% is because I cannot remember the time before my 10th birthday.
As you know I am 42 years old. >> Correct
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