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2014-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi^^ Jane~ I think you are having lunch now... I am so happy to talk with you everyday~ You are so nice person I've ever met in foreigners. hihihihi -How do you decide between right and wrong?- The home work you give makes me embarressed always.. This question also makes me think for a long time. Most of my choice depends on the knowlege I've learned from school,family and my real experienses. but sometimes,I am also confused what is right or wrong. for example,Is it right or wrong I give money to beggars? someone can say It's wrong. because they will not work to make money. and also someone can say It's right. because to help is better than not to help them. Although I can decide right or wrong, but I cannot say that my decison is right or wrong.

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Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! You really have the ability to make me feel good. To return the compliment, I\'d like to tell you that I am nice to those who are nice to me. Since you\'re so nice to me, I am also nice to you. Take care and have a great time! T. JanE ^^ Hi^^ Jane~>> Correct I think you are having lunch now... >> Correct I am so happy to talk with you everyday~ >> Correct You are so nice person I\'ve ever met in foreigners. hihihihi >> You are the nicest foreigner I\'ve ever known. -How do you decide between right and wrong?->> Correct The home work you give makes me embarressed always.. >> The homework you give me always makes me feel embarrassed.  This question also makes me think for a long time. >> Correct Most of my choice depends on the knowlege I\'ve learned from school,family and my real experienses. >> Most of my choices depend on the knowledge I\'ve learned from school, family, and real experiences.  but sometimes,I am also confused what is right or wrong. >> However, sometimes I am confused between what\'s right or wrong.  for example,Is it right or wrong I give money to beggars? >> For example, is it right or wrong to give money to beggars?  someone can say It\'s wrong. because they will not work to make money. >> Some people say it\'s wrong because they won\'t work to make money.  and also someone can say It\'s right. because to help is better than not to help them.>> Some people can say it\'s right because helping is better than not helping them.  Although I can decide right or wrong, but I cannot say that my decison is right or wrong. >> Although I can personally decide what to do, I cannot say that my decision is right or wrong. 

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