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Oh~~Jane~ It's again.. another deep question.....
- Do people's personalities change depending on who they're with?
I say,'Yes'.
We are social animals. We have to be concerned about how they think about me.
Frankely, If I meet a nice guy. I may pretend to be an elegant lady. how humane I am. How about you? hohohoho~~ See you later, Jane~~
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Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition! Whoa! You submitted two homework! You must be inspired. Take care and have a wonderful day!
T. JanE ^^
Oh~~Jane~ It\'s again.. another deep question.....>> Oh, Jane, this is another deep question. - Do people\'s personalities change depending on who they\'re with?>> Correct
I say,\'Yes\'.>> Correct
We are social animals.
>> Correct
We have to be concerned about how they think about me.>> We have to be concerned about how people think about us.
Frankely, If I meet a nice guy. I may pretend to be an elegant lady.
>> Frankly, if I meet a nice guy, I may pretend to be an elegant lady.
how humane I am.
>> Correct
How about you? hohohoho~~
>> Correct
See you later, Jane~~
>> Correct
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