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2014-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Oh~~Jane~ It's again.. another deep question..... - Do people's personalities change depending on who they're with? I say,'Yes'. We are social animals. We have to be concerned about how they think about me. Frankely, If I meet a nice guy. I may pretend to be an elegant lady. how humane I am. How about you? hohohoho~~ See you later, Jane~~

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Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! Whoa! You submitted two homework! You must be inspired. Take care and have a wonderful day! T. JanE ^^ Oh~~Jane~ It\'s again.. another deep question.....>> Oh, Jane, this is another deep question. - Do people\'s personalities change depending on who they\'re with?>> Correct I say,\'Yes\'.>> Correct We are social animals. >> Correct We have to be concerned about how they think about me.>> We have to be concerned about how people think about us.  Frankely, If I meet a nice guy. I may pretend to be an elegant lady. >> Frankly, if I meet a nice guy, I may pretend to be an elegant lady.  how humane I am. >> Correct How about you? hohohoho~~ >> Correct See you later, Jane~~ >> Correct

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