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2014-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Hi Erine. I am sorry for mispronounciateing your name. I heard recoding about talking with you. I am really sorry for continual laughing. Because I might feel shy when I explain my opinion. And I use Um sounds in several times. Hearing that recoded help me correcting my mistakes. Next time, I try to show you getting better attitude. -------------------------------------------------- According to get a driver's license, the Age is not matter. The more important thing is responsibility to take their acting or not. In my case, I have driver's license. But If I might have accident, I can't handle it. I might feel confused. Despite that I am a adult I feel congest, teenagers are hard to cope with it. That is the reason why teenager is restricted to get a driver's license. I think that.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]!^^
I\'m fine with the mispronunciation of my name. It usually happens!^^

But I hope you will get it next time!^^ Don\'t be shy in explaining your ideas. It will hinder

you in expressing your ideas in our class.

You uttered a lot of fillers (um sounds) but we can

remove that.^^

~~Teacher Erine~~

Hi Erine.

>> Correct.
I am sorry for mispronounciateing your name.

>> I am sorry for mispronouncing your name.

I heard recoding about talking with you.

>> I listened to the recording.
I am really sorry for continual laughing.

>> I am really sorry for laughing continuously.
Because I might feel shy when I explain my opinion.

>> I might feel shy when I explain my opinion.
And I use Um sounds in several times.

>> And I uttered \"um\" sounds several times.
Hearing that recoded help me correcting my mistakes.

>> Hearing the recording/Listening to the recording helped me correct my mistakes.
Next time, I try to show you getting better attitude.

>> Next time, I will show you a better attitude.
According to get a driver\'s license, the Age is not matter.

>> Age doesn\'t matter in getting a driver\'s license.
The more important thing is responsibility to take their acting or not.

>> The more important thing is the responsibility in taking the action.
In my case, I have driver\'s license.

>> In my case, I have a driver\'s license.

But If I might have accident, I can\'t handle it.

>> If I have an accident, I might not handle it.

I might feel confused.

>> Correct.

Despite that I am a adult I feel congest, teenagers are hard to cope with it.

>> I am an adult and feel congested; teenagers will have a harder time coping up with it.

That is the reason why teenager is restricted to get a driver\'s license.

>> That is the reason why teenagers are restricted to get a driver\'s license.

I think that.

>> That\'s what I think.

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