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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~ Jane~
Yes It's eerie and creepy Friday. Moreover, It's raining and windy in Korea,
It is so perfact atmophere to enjoy Halloween~~
Happy Holloween and Have a nice weekend!
-Is it right to do the wrong thing for the right reason?
I think it depends on what the right reason is.
Whenever I watche movies about a cruel and brutal muderer who is never captured, I want to treat him exactly same way how he did to victims.
I know I cannot punish him like that way because it's wrong.
But If i kill him, everybody will love me
It's wrong to do wrong thing for the right reason in a law.
But I want to beg God to give us exceptions in our world for the peace.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition! The question I gave you for the homework reminds me of the saying \"The end justifies the means\" by Niccolo Machiavelli. I think that as long as we have good intentions, we must be excused for doing something \'wrong\'. Sometimes, people can\'t get justice by relying on the laws of men alone. Sometimes, we have to do something \'wrong\' to make things right.
T. JanE ^^
Hi~ Jane~ >> Correct
Yes, it\'s eerie and creepy Friday.
>> Correct
Moreover, it\'s raining and windy in Korea,>> Correct
It is so perfact atmophere to enjoy Halloween~~>> It is sucha perfect atmosphere to enjoy Halloween.
Happy Holloween and have a nice weekend!>> Correct-Is it right to do the wrong thing for the right reason?>> Correct
I think it depends on what the right reason is.>> Correct
Whenever I watche movies about a cruel and brutal muderer who is never captured, I want to treat him exactly same way how he did to victims. >> Whenever I watch movies about a cruel and brutal murdered who is never captured, I want to treat him exactly the same way he did to his victims.
I know I cannot punish him like that way because it\'s wrong. >> Correct
But if I kill him, everybody will love me.>> Correct
It\'s wrong to do wrong thing for the right reason in a law. >> It\'s wrong to do a wrong thing even for the right reason in law.
But I want to beg God to give us exceptions in our world for the peace.
>> But I want to beg God to give us exceptions for the sake of peace.
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