home work
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
In not more than 10 sentences, write your thoughts about the following topic:
Would you be a martyr and give up your reputation amongst your peers to do what you know is right? Or is it better to be pragmatic and sit and do nothing?
- Wow~ you give me a hard question again, moreover,I cannot understand the question clealy~
I think I am not a kind of bystander, I mean, I will not go away if I watch someone has in trouble.
I have met a nice friend few months ago. She is working for the restaurant where I am a regullar customer. She doesn't know her parents. because her parents threw away when she was very young. Someimes, shge said that I am too much firend to her. But I don't care what school she graduated, how she loooks, and where she comes from. I just care about her mind and dignity.
I am very weak to the weak and I am strong to the strong.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition! I think that you have a soft heart that melts easily to people who are not in a very pleasant situation. Also, I think that you have a strong personality that will never let you down when facing people who have strong personality as well. I also have that kind of personality. We have something in common, that\'s why we click!
T. JanE ^^
- Wow~ you give me a hard question again. Moreover, I cannot understand the question clealy~ >> Correct I think I am not a kind of bystander, I mean, I will not go away if I watch someone has in trouble.>> I think I am not a bystander, but I will not go away if someone is in trouble.
I have met a nice friend few months ago.
>> Correct
She is working for the restaurant where I am a regular customer.
>> Correct
She doesn\'t know her parents. because her parents threw away when she was very young.
>> She doesn;t know her parents because they abandoned her when she was very young.
Someimes, shge said that I am too much firend to her.
>> Sometimes, she says that I am too friendly to her.
But I don\'t care what school she graduated, how she loooks, and where she comes from.
>> But I don\'t care about what school she graduated from, how she looks, and where she comes from.
I just care about her mind and dignity. >> Correct
I am very weak to the weak and I am strong to the strong.
>> Correct
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