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Hello. jessie.
I am happy girl, jessica. ^^
I'm not the frightening experience.
But I had amazing and special experience.
When I was tweleve years old, I went to private educational institute.
I had to cross the crosswallk.
I looked all around cars came.
That crosswalk had not traffic lights.
There was no car.
I walked the crosswalk.
By the way people were a surprised look.
Because The bus came to me.
I don't realized the bus came.
Due to I listed the music.
I felt abnormality. So I looked back.
Then the bus grazed with me.
Fortunately, I avoided the bus.
I thought that I am very lucky girl.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Wow! What a shocking experience.
Thanks for sharing it.
Anyway, I\'m glad that you were able to avoid being hit by the bus.
Well, I hope you learned something from it. ^_^
Be more careful.^_^
~T. Jessie~
Hello. jessie.
>> Hello Jessie!
I am happy girl, jessica. ^^
>> I am a happy girl.
I\'m not the frightening experience.
>> I don\'t have any frightening experience.
But I had amazing and special experience.
>> But I had an amazing and special experience.
When I was tweleve years old, I went to private educational institute.
>> When I was twelve years old, I went to a private educational institute.
I had to cross the crosswallk.
>> I had to cross the crosswalk.
I looked all around cars came.
>> Do you mean: I looked around the road.
That crosswalk had not traffic lights.
>> That crosswalk had no traffic lights.
There was no car.
>> Correct!
I walked the crosswalk.
>> I walked on the crosswalk.
By the way people were a surprised look.
>> Do you mean: As I was walking, people looked surprise.
Because The bus came to me.
>> Because a bus is coming towards me.
I don\'t realized the bus came.
>> I didn\'t realize that a bus is coming towards me.
Due to I listed the music.
>> Because I was listening to the music.
I felt abnormality.
>> I felt that something is strange.
So I looked back.
>> Correct!
Then the bus grazed with me.
>> Then the bus grazed me.
Fortunately, I avoided the bus.
>> Correct!
I thought that I am very lucky girl.
>> Correct!
Wow! What a shocking experience.
Thanks for sharing it.
Anyway, I\'m glad that you were able to avoid being hit by the bus.
Well, I hope you learned something from it. ^_^
Be more careful.^_^
~T. Jessie~
Hello. jessie.
>> Hello Jessie!
I am happy girl, jessica. ^^
>> I am a happy girl.
I\'m not the frightening experience.
>> I don\'t have any frightening experience.
But I had amazing and special experience.
>> But I had an amazing and special experience.
When I was tweleve years old, I went to private educational institute.
>> When I was twelve years old, I went to a private educational institute.
I had to cross the crosswallk.
>> I had to cross the crosswalk.
I looked all around cars came.
>> Do you mean: I looked around the road.
That crosswalk had not traffic lights.
>> That crosswalk had no traffic lights.
There was no car.
>> Correct!
I walked the crosswalk.
>> I walked on the crosswalk.
By the way people were a surprised look.
>> Do you mean: As I was walking, people looked surprise.
Because The bus came to me.
>> Because a bus is coming towards me.
I don\'t realized the bus came.
>> I didn\'t realize that a bus is coming towards me.
Due to I listed the music.
>> Because I was listening to the music.
I felt abnormality.
>> I felt that something is strange.
So I looked back.
>> Correct!
Then the bus grazed with me.
>> Then the bus grazed me.
Fortunately, I avoided the bus.
>> Correct!
I thought that I am very lucky girl.
>> Correct!
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