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2014-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello. Jessie! I feel sleep. I want in my bed. Today is free. ^^ So I update my home work. When i heard the country china. I spring red color and beautiful woman. Red is symbol of china. China national flag is red. And chinese like red. They think red bring a good thing. Secound many beautiful woman are in the china. I think chinese have small face, long leg.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Thanks for once again answering your homework.

I am happy that you have a free schedule today.

I hope you enjoyed it.

Please go over the corrections I wrote.

Enjoy the rest of the day!

~T. Jessie~

Hello. Jessie!

>> Correct!

OR>> Hello Jessie!
I feel sleep.

>> I feel sleepy.

I want in my bed.

>> I want to go in my bed.
Today is free. ^^

>> Correct!
So I update my home work.

>> So I am updating my homework.

OR>> So I updated my homework.
When i heard the country china.

>> When I hear the country China, the red color and beautiful woman springs in my mind.
I spring red color and beautiful woman.

>> When I hear the country China, the red color and beautiful woman springs in my mind.
Red is symbol of china.

>> Red is the symbol of China.
China national flag is red.

>> China\'s national flag is red.
And chinese like red.

>> And Chinese like red.
They think red bring a good thing.

>> They think red brings a good thing.
Secound many beautiful woman are in the china.

>> Second, many beautiful women are in China.
I think chinese have small face, long leg.

>> I think Chinese have small face and long legs.

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