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Good evening!
Thanks for sharing your idea about holiday.
I think that\'s a good holiday but we have to think of a better term for it.^_^
Anyway, enjoy the rest of the night!
~T. Jessie~
Hi~ Jessie!
>> Hi Jessie!
Umm... I like holidays.
>> Correct!
Because holiday consider weekend.
>> Because holidays are consider weekend.
If important Korea memorial day, Pditician prepare interview and hold a celebration event.
>> Do you mean: If it's an important Korean memorial day, the government prepare interviews and hold a celebration event.
But Event didn\'t with people.
>> But there is no event for people.
Korean just watch the TV.
>> Koreans just watch TV.
If I can make holiday. I will make \"Present my self\" this holiday means \"I love myself\"
>> If I can make holiday, I will make a \"Present for myself\" this holiday means \"I love myself\"
Neoteric are very busy.
>> Correct!
Especially koreans are very busy and wants faster everything.
>> Most especially Koreans are very busy and they want everything to be faster.
They have not enough rest.
>> They don't have enough rest.
At \"present my self, Many restaurant will have discount.
>> At 'Present for myself', many restaurants will have discounts.
Sometimes They give free food.
>> Sometimes, they will give free food.
Also The theather will open free movie.
>> Also, the theater will be open for free movie.
Preson can go anywhere. ^^
>> People can go anywhere.
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