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2014-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi~ Jessie! Umm... I like holidays. Because holiday consider weekend. If important Korea memorial day, Pditician prepare interview and hold a celebration event. But Event didn't with people. Korean just watch the TV. If I can make holiday. I will make "Present my self" this holiday means "I love myself" Neoteric are very busy. Especially koreans are very busy and wants faster everything. They have not enough rest. At "present my self, Many restaurant will have discount. Sometimes They give free food. Also The theather will open free movie. Preson can go anywhere. ^^

강사 첨삭

Good evening!

Thanks for sharing your idea about holiday.

I think that\'s a good holiday but we have to think of a better term for it.^_^

Anyway, enjoy the rest of the night!

~T. Jessie~

Hi~ Jessie!
>> Hi Jessie!
Umm... I like holidays.
>> Correct!
Because holiday consider weekend.

>> Because holidays are consider weekend.
If important Korea memorial day, Pditician prepare interview and hold a celebration event.

>> Do you mean:  If it's an important Korean memorial day, the government prepare interviews and hold a celebration event.
But Event didn\'t with people. 
>> But there is no event for people.
Korean just watch the TV. 

>> Koreans just watch TV.
If I can make holiday. I will make \"Present my self\" this holiday means \"I love myself\"

>> If I can make holiday, I will make a \"Present for myself\" this holiday means \"I love myself\"
Neoteric are very busy.

>> Correct!
Especially koreans are very busy and wants faster everything.

>> Most especially Koreans are very busy and they want everything to be faster.
They have not enough rest.

>> They don't have enough rest.
At \"present my self, Many restaurant will have discount.

>> At 'Present for myself', many restaurants will have discounts.
Sometimes They give free food. 

>> Sometimes, they will give free food.

Also The theather will open free movie.

>> Also, the theater will be open for free movie.
Preson can go anywhere. ^^

>> People can go anywhere.

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