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Hi~Jane~ I was so happy with you in our class today. You'd better having brunch everday for our class. You are so energetic and you give me lots of fun. topic: Is a time machine possible? If it were to be technically feasible, what would be the danger of doing so? - I think, time machine is not feasible in technically at least in my life. But If we have a time machine, we will regret to have a time macnine because it can cause chaos in our life such as crimes, deseases, population, birth, death love and so on. The reason we accept our life is the most valuable is that life is irreversible. Time must go ahead not going back. If we can go to our past throgh a time machine, We are not a human anymore. I think the ruller of time must be God. To tell the truth, I really want to experience the jurney of time for not to regret of my life. Where do I want to go? I want to go to my future time and I want to see how I live my life. Where do you want to go, Jane?

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! I always have brunch two hours before our class, so I guess the food that I eat makes the difference. Anyway, if a time machine were technically feasible, I\'d rather go to the future than to the past. There\'s nothing I can do about the past, but I can do something about my future. I\'d rather be ready for it. Take care and have a great time! Talk to you later! T. JanE ^^ Hi~Jane~ >> Correct I was so happy with you in our class today. >> Correct You\'d better having brunch everday for our class. >> You\'d better have brunch everyday for our class.  You are so energetic and you give me lots of fun. >> Correct topic:Is a time machine possible? If it were to be technically feasible, what would be the danger of doing so? >> Correct - I think, time machine is not feasible in technically at least in my life. >> I think, time machine will not be technically feasible at least in my lifetime.  But If we have a time machine, we will regret to have a time macnine because it can cause chaos in our life such as crimes, deseases, population, birth, death love and so on. >> But if we had a time machine, we would regret having it because it would cause chaos in our life such as crimes, diseases, birth, death, love, and so on.  The reason we accept our life is the most valuable is that life is irreversible.>> The reason we accept life is because the most valuable thing about life is that it is irreversible.  Time must go ahead not going back. >> Time must go ahead and it does not come back.  If we can go to our past throgh a time machine, We are not a human anymore. >> CorrectIf we could go back to our past through a time machine, we would not be humans anymore.  I think the ruller of time must be God.>> I think the ruler of time is God.  To tell the truth, I really want to experience the jurney of time for not to regret of my life. >> To tell the truth, I really want to experience a journey of time so I won\'t regret my life.  Where do I want to go? >> Correct I want to go to my future time and I want to see how I live my life. >> I want to go to my future time and I want to see how I will be living my life.  Where do you want to go, Jane? >> Correct