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Korea don't allow drug. About Drug Korea strict with rules.
Some country allow the hemp.
But Korea don't allow hemp.
Sometimes Popular singer, actor blowed hemp.
If They are exposed in police. Their affair is headline.
I think drug occur weakness.
Using Drugs people need to help.
They are divested of self-control by drug.
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Hi there [이름]!
I appreciate your effort in expressing your opinion.
I\'m happy to read your composition.
You made use of very good vocabularies and I do hope you\'ll put them in your mind.
You can also make use of them during the class.
Well, let\'s enjoy this day!
See you!
~T. Jessie~
Korea don\'t allow drug.
>> Korea doesn\'t allow drug.
About Drug Korea strict with rules.
>> Korea has strict rules about drugs.
Some country allow the hemp.
>> Some countries allow hemp.
But Korea don\'t allow hemp.
>> But Korea doesn\'t allow hemp.
Sometimes Popular singer, actor blowed hemp.
>> Sometimes some popular singers and actors use hemp.
If They are exposed in police.
>> If they are exposed by the police, they will be the headline.
Their affair is headline.
>> If they are exposed by the police, they will be the headline.
I think drug occur weakness.
>> Do you mean: I think drugs bring out our weaknesses.
Using Drugs people need to help.
>> People who are using drugs need help.
They are divested of self-control by drug.
>> Their self control is divested bu drugs.
OR>> Drugs divested their self-control.
I appreciate your effort in expressing your opinion.
I\'m happy to read your composition.
You made use of very good vocabularies and I do hope you\'ll put them in your mind.
You can also make use of them during the class.
Well, let\'s enjoy this day!
See you!
~T. Jessie~
Korea don\'t allow drug.
>> Korea doesn\'t allow drug.
About Drug Korea strict with rules.
>> Korea has strict rules about drugs.
Some country allow the hemp.
>> Some countries allow hemp.
But Korea don\'t allow hemp.
>> But Korea doesn\'t allow hemp.
Sometimes Popular singer, actor blowed hemp.
>> Sometimes some popular singers and actors use hemp.
If They are exposed in police.
>> If they are exposed by the police, they will be the headline.
Their affair is headline.
>> If they are exposed by the police, they will be the headline.
I think drug occur weakness.
>> Do you mean: I think drugs bring out our weaknesses.
Using Drugs people need to help.
>> People who are using drugs need help.
They are divested of self-control by drug.
>> Their self control is divested bu drugs.
OR>> Drugs divested their self-control.
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