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Hi! Jessie!!
Thank you. Your teaching.
I eventually understand yesterday homework.^^
I just consider studying for taking an exam.
So I thought at the same a working and studying is the very hard.
So I thought impossibility finish the working and go night university.
Then Let's start homework on today.
I prefer in small town.
Because These days I feel city life very stuffy.
In the chiㅣd, I lived the country side.
There was no computer, theater and bar. ^^
But my sister and brother and me very happy.
We ran field and caught the butterfly, dragonfly, etc.
We were alawys simile and happy.
City life overflow everything.
But Sometime I feel tired city life.
But Small town life have one problem.
Small town has few small hospital.
If I sick I am so sick, I will be in danger.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks for sharing your choice.
Anyway, I also like to live in a small town but like you\'ve said, it has it\'s disadvantages.
Please check the corrections.
See you soon!
~T. Jessie~
Hi! Jessie!!
>> Correct!
Thank you.
>> Correct!
>> Thank you for teaching me.
Your teaching.
>> Thank you for teaching me.
I eventually understand yesterday homework.^^
>> I eventually understand yesterday\'s homework.^^
I just consider studying for taking an exam.
>> I just considered studying for taking an exam.
So I thought at the same a working and studying is the very hard.
>> So I thought that working at the same time studying is the very hard.
So I thought impossibility finish the working and go night university.
>> So I thought that it\'s impossible to finish working and then to go to the university at night.
Then Let\'s start homework on today.
>> Then, let\'s start the homework for today.
I prefer in small town.
>> I prefer to live in a small town.
Because These days I feel city life very stuffy.
>> Because these days I feel that life in a city is very stuffy.
In the chiㅣd, I lived the country side.
>> Do you mean: When I was a child, I lived in a country side.
There was no computer, theater and bar. ^^
>> Correct!
But my sister and brother and me very happy.
>> But my sister, brother and I were very happy.
We ran field and caught the butterfly, dragonfly, etc.
>> We ran on the field and caught butterfly, dragonfly, etc.
We were alawys simile and happy.
>> We always smiled and we were happy.
City life overflow everything.
>> Correct!
But Sometime I feel tired city life.
>> But sometimes I feel tired of city life.
But Small town life have one problem.
>> But living in a small town has one problem.
Small town has few small hospital.
>> A small town has few small hospitals.
If I sick I am so sick, I will be in danger.
>> If I am so sick, I will be in danger.
Thanks for sharing your choice.
Anyway, I also like to live in a small town but like you\'ve said, it has it\'s disadvantages.
Please check the corrections.
See you soon!
~T. Jessie~
Hi! Jessie!!
>> Correct!
Thank you.
>> Correct!
>> Thank you for teaching me.
Your teaching.
>> Thank you for teaching me.
I eventually understand yesterday homework.^^
>> I eventually understand yesterday\'s homework.^^
I just consider studying for taking an exam.
>> I just considered studying for taking an exam.
So I thought at the same a working and studying is the very hard.
>> So I thought that working at the same time studying is the very hard.
So I thought impossibility finish the working and go night university.
>> So I thought that it\'s impossible to finish working and then to go to the university at night.
Then Let\'s start homework on today.
>> Then, let\'s start the homework for today.
I prefer in small town.
>> I prefer to live in a small town.
Because These days I feel city life very stuffy.
>> Because these days I feel that life in a city is very stuffy.
In the chiㅣd, I lived the country side.
>> Do you mean: When I was a child, I lived in a country side.
There was no computer, theater and bar. ^^
>> Correct!
But my sister and brother and me very happy.
>> But my sister, brother and I were very happy.
We ran field and caught the butterfly, dragonfly, etc.
>> We ran on the field and caught butterfly, dragonfly, etc.
We were alawys simile and happy.
>> We always smiled and we were happy.
City life overflow everything.
>> Correct!
But Sometime I feel tired city life.
>> But sometimes I feel tired of city life.
But Small town life have one problem.
>> But living in a small town has one problem.
Small town has few small hospital.
>> A small town has few small hospitals.
If I sick I am so sick, I will be in danger.
>> If I am so sick, I will be in danger.
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