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Which Is More Important: Our Privacy or National Security? - I think, National security is more important than privacy. There will be no privacy without national security. But the problem is how much govermant control privacy for national security. For examples, there are many cctv in road even a small alley in Korea. Cctv is not only to prevent cirmes but also to national security. But some people say that cctv are an invasion of privacy. Privacy must be respected regardeless whoes lif it is. In conclusion, Altough national security is more important than privcy, By all means, to secure nation cannot invade rights of privacy.

Hi there, Ms. [이름]!Thank you for your composition today! You established a good point in your writing. However, in reality, national security cannot be perfectly achieved without violating our privacy. We always insist on drawing a line for the them, but it is not easy to do so. T. JanE ^^ Which Is More Important: Our Privacy or National Security? >> Correct - I think, National security is more important than privacy.>> Correct There will be no privacy without national security. >> Correct But the problem is how much govermant control privacy for national security.>> But the problem is, how much control does the government have over our privacy for national security?  For examples, there are many cctv in road even a small alley in Korea.>> For example, there are many CCTV on the road even in a small alley in Korea.  Cctv is not only to prevent cirmes but also to national security.>> CCTV does not only prevent crimes, but also aids in national security.  But some people say that cctv are an invasion of privacy.>> But some people say that CCTV invades our privacy.  Privacy must be respected regardeless whoes lif it is.>> Privacy must be respected regardless of who the person is.  In conclusion, Altough national security is more important than privcy, By all means, to secure nation cannot invade rights of privacy.  >> In conclusion, although national security is more important than privacy, it must not be done to the extent of invading people\'s right to privacy.