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Does technology make us more alone? - In some ways, technology make us living individually. We don't need helps from oherts any more because we can solve our problems just one call thesedays. Technology make us isolating in some aspects. But I think, thechnology make us to communicate with all of the world at the same time by internet, 24-hour borad casting and SNS. We can make friends from different countries by SNS or Facebook and so on, If we feel lonely in the middle of night, we can find peoples who can talk with and meet. Even more, If you have to go to dinner alone, you can find people who join your dinner with you. Technology give you not olny convenience but also friends. In near future, I believe, technology will give me a interatual robot which I can talk and live togather. I love robot, well I have to live long If my wish comes true...

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! In some ways, technology has made us \"alone\". I\'ve noticed that in coffee shops, most people don\'t talk with each other anymore. Rather, they have their smartphones or tablets on their hand chatting with other people. In this sense, I can say they are physically alone. In contrast, technology bridges the distance between and among people who are located in different parts of the world. It has made friendship possible despite the time zones and distance. I think, we must learn to use technology at the right place and at the right time. We must not take the physical presence of people for granted by being busy with products of technology when we are together. More importantly, we must not disregard our friends when we are separated, because we can always keep in touch with the help of technology. T. JanE ^^ Does technology make us more alone?>> Correct - In some ways, technology make us living individually. >> In some ways, technology makes us live individually.  We don\'t need helps from oherts any more because we can solve our problems just one call thesedays.>> We don\'t need help from others anymore because we can solve our problems with just one call these days.  Technology make us isolating in some aspects. >> Technology has made us isolated in some aspects.  But I think, thechnology make us to communicate with all of the world at the same time by internet, 24-hour borad casting and SNS.>> But I think, technology makes us communicate with all over the world at the same time by Internet, and 24-hour broadcasting and SNS.  We can make friends from different countries by SNS or Facebook and so on.>> Correct If we feel lonely in the middle of night, we can find peoples who can talk with and meet.>> If we feel lobely in the middle of the night, we can find people whom we can talk with and meet online.  Even more, If you have to go to dinner alone, you can find people who join your dinner with you.>> Even more, if you have to have dinner alone, you can find people who can join you.  Technology give you not olny convenience but also friends.>> Technology has given us not only convenience but also friends.  In near future, I believe, technology will give me a interatual robot which I can talk and live togather.>> In the near future, I believe technology will give me an interactive robot which I can talk and live together with. I love robot, well I have to live long If my wish comes true... >> I love robots, so I have to live long if my wish would come true.