home work
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~ jane~ You give me always hard home work.^^ I had to spend at least 20-30 minutes for home work.
But I think I might like this kind of home work, because nobody askes me like that questions or my opinions. It's good opportunity to me to think another subjects.
Have a wonderful day~~
How important is Arts Education?
- To know arts, we don't need to euducate.
I think, arts is not understanding, arts is feeling.
But To enjoy arts, we need to educate about basic arts education such as name of famous artists, history of arts, stream of arts and so on.
In my case, when I was a student, there were not many arts classes compare to other calsses. Because of enterance exam.
In modern society, creative work is more promising and needed than technology.
Mechinery can take place of human labor but nothing can subsititute for creation.
For this reason, To enjoy and to feel arts, arts education is important and will be more important as time goes by.
Huh~ Finish!!1 give me aplause.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!Thank you for your composition! I really commend you for always doing your best in answering the homework. You always say that they\'re difficult, but you always end up with good answers. Way to go! Take care and talk to you later!
T. JanE ^^
Hi~ jane~
>> Correct
You give me always hard home work.^^
>> You always give me hard homework.
I had to spend at least 20-30 minutes for home work.
>> Correct
But I think I might like this kind of home work, because nobody askes me like that questions or my opinions.
>> But I think I like this kind of homework because nobody asks me thses kinds of questions.
It\'s good opportunity to me to think another subjects.
>> It\'s a good opportunity for me to think about other topics.
Have a wonderful day~~
>> Correct
How important is Arts Education?
>> Correct
- To know arts, we don\'t need to euducate.
>> To know arts, we don\'t need to be educated.
I think, arts is not understanding, arts is feeling.
>> I think, arts is not about understanding, but it\'s all about feelings.
But To enjoy arts, we need to educate about basic arts education such as name of famous artists, history of arts, stream of arts and so on.
>> However, in order to enjoy arts, we need to be educated with basic arts education that deals with famous artists, history or arts, stream of arts, and so on.
In my case, when I was a student, there were not many arts classes compare to other calsses. Because of enterance exam.
>> In my case, when I was a student, there were not many art classes compared to others because of entrance exam.
In modern society, creative work is more promising and needed than technology.
>> Correct
Mechinery can take place of human labor but nothing can subsititute for creation.
>> Machinery can take the place of human labor, but nothing can substitute creativity.
For this reason, To enjoy and to feel arts, arts education is important and will be more important as time goes by.
>> Correct
Huh~ Finish!!1
>> Correct
give me aplause.
>> Give me an applause.
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