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학생이 쓴 원문
I usually thanks to Jessie.
I owe that your are good teaching English.
I feel I need to study more. I make difficulty about grammer.
I am always searching the internet. ^^::
I'm so tired in the evening. I always just sleep.
Umm.... Anyway Let's talk about today homework.
I think better wearing school uniforms.
Because Almost person are very busy In morning.
If student didn't choice wearing the clothes, He is late for school.
Fashion influence in school life.
Rich students and poor students will make friends.
In that time They are wearing the uniform, They looks like same.
So They will be closed.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thanks for the compliment.
I am also glad because you really want to learn English.
Let\'s do our best for you to be better, okay? Fighting!
Anyway, please check the corrections I noted. See you!
Enjoy your weekend!
~T. Jessie~
I usually thanks to Jessie.
>> I am usually thankful to Jessie.
I owe that your are good teaching English.
>> I\'m thankful that you are good at teaching English.
I feel I need to study more.
>> I feel that I need to study more.
I make difficulty about grammer.
>> I have difficulty with grammar.
I am always searching the internet. ^^::
>> Correct!
I\'m so tired in the evening.
>> Correct!
I always just sleep.
>> Correct!
Umm.... Anyway Let\'s talk about today homework.
>> Anyway, let\'s talk about today\'s homework.
I think better wearing school uniforms.
>> I think wearing school uniforms is better.
Because Almost person are very busy In morning.
>> Because almost all people are very busy in the morning.
If student didn\'t choice wearing the clothes, He is late for school.
>> If students will still choose the clothes that they have to wear, they will be late for school.
Fashion influence in school life.
>> Fashion influences school life.
Rich students and poor students will make friends.
>> Correct!
In that time They are wearing the uniform, They looks like same.
>> At that time, they are wearing uniform so they look the same.
So They will be closed.
>> So they will be closer.
Thanks for the compliment.
I am also glad because you really want to learn English.
Let\'s do our best for you to be better, okay? Fighting!
Anyway, please check the corrections I noted. See you!
Enjoy your weekend!
~T. Jessie~
I usually thanks to Jessie.
>> I am usually thankful to Jessie.
I owe that your are good teaching English.
>> I\'m thankful that you are good at teaching English.
I feel I need to study more.
>> I feel that I need to study more.
I make difficulty about grammer.
>> I have difficulty with grammar.
I am always searching the internet. ^^::
>> Correct!
I\'m so tired in the evening.
>> Correct!
I always just sleep.
>> Correct!
Umm.... Anyway Let\'s talk about today homework.
>> Anyway, let\'s talk about today\'s homework.
I think better wearing school uniforms.
>> I think wearing school uniforms is better.
Because Almost person are very busy In morning.
>> Because almost all people are very busy in the morning.
If student didn\'t choice wearing the clothes, He is late for school.
>> If students will still choose the clothes that they have to wear, they will be late for school.
Fashion influence in school life.
>> Fashion influences school life.
Rich students and poor students will make friends.
>> Correct!
In that time They are wearing the uniform, They looks like same.
>> At that time, they are wearing uniform so they look the same.
So They will be closed.
>> So they will be closer.
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