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2014-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Good morning Jane~ When you read my homework. you will have morning coffee at the office on Monday. Have a wonderful Monday morning!! Would You Rather Work From Home or in an Office? - Personally, I like working in an office. I can concentrate on my work better than working from home, therfore, I can finish my work faster and more perfact. Surely, Working from home is more productive and convenient because of saving time to go to an office as long as I can control my time such as waking up time and working time. In my case, I will be lazy at my work, moreover, I cannot get an opportunity to meet other people and I will loose competitive mind at work. To develop myself in company groups and further in society, I'd rather choose to work in an office. But System of working from home is very usful because it gives more chances to work for disabled people or house wives. I am sure there are many peoples who are eager for work from home.

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Hi there. Ms. [이름]! Thanks you for your composition! Well, I\'ve experienced working at home and I did that for four years. I enjoyed it and I felt so relaxed back then. I didn\'t worry about fashion, traffic jam, being late for work, etc. However, I decided to go back to work in an office because the income in my homebased job was not so stable. If only I could have a stable income, I would prefer working from home. T. JanE ^^ Good morning Jane~>> Correct When you read my homework. you will have morning coffee at the office on Monday.>> You\'ll be reading my homework on Monday morning while having coffee in the office.  Have a wonderful Monday morning!! >> Correct Would You Rather Work From Home or in an Office? >> Correct - Personally, I like working in an office. >> Correct I can concentrate on my work better than working from home, therfore, I can finish my work faster and more perfact.>> I can concentrate on my work better than when working from home, therefore, I can finish my work faster and more perfectly. Surely, working from home is more productive and convenient because of saving time to go to an office as long as I can control my time such as waking up time and working time.>> Correct In my case, I will be lazy at my work, moreover, I cannot get an opportunity to meet other people and I will loose competitive mind at work.>> In my case, I will be lazy at work. Moreoever, I cannot get an opportunity to meet other people, and I will lose my sense of competitiveness at work.  To develop myself in company groups and further in society, I\'d rather choose to work in an office.>> Correct But System of working from home is very usful because it gives more chances to work for disabled people or house wives. >> But the system of working from home is very useful because it gives more chance for disabled people and housewives to work.  I am sure there are many peoples who are eager for work from home. >> I am sure there are many people who are eager to work ftom home. 

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