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2014-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello. Jessie! I am delighted to talk with you.^^ I agree that students should be physical exercise. Korea students are enforce a lot of study. People beilve that If Students get high grade, They will be success. Study is requisites for success. For that reason Students are disregard their free time. So exercise is need fo students health.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!
Are you enjoying your weekend?
Thanks for sharing your opinion.
I can say that you are getting better in constructing sentences.
Keep it up [이름]!
Let\'s enjoy this Sunday!
~T. Jessie~
Hello.
>> Correct!
Jessie!
>> Correct!
I am delighted to talk with you.^^
>> Correct!
I agree that students should be physical exercise.
>> I agree that students should be physical healthy so they should exercise.
Korea students are enforce a lot of study.
>> Korean students are enforced to study a lot.
People beilve that If Students get high grade,They will be success.
>> People believe that if students get high grades, they will be successful.
Study is requisites for success.
>> Studying is a requisite for success.
For that reason Students are disregard their free time.
>> For that reason students disregard their free time.
So exercise is need fo students health.
>> So exercise is needed for student\'s health.

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