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2014-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Oh~Jane~~ I don't understand home work for today. What role does procrastination play in your life? Does it mean what role I don't want play in my life such as mother, wife, student and grandmother? Well, I was a child of my parents, and also I am a wife of my husband now. On a second thought, I dinn't want to get married with someone. I wanted to live alone. I think I was afraid to be involved with someone forever as his wife and as my children's mother. I don't want to be wrinkeld old woman now. If it's possible. But no one can go back in time. I think this question is for teeagers because they have many roles to play in their life.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition. I appreciate your effort in trying to answer the homework despite finding it difficult. The question is all about procrastination or putting off doing some things. As for me, as much as possible, I don\'t give way to procrastination. I like getting things done as soon as possible. Therefore, the role of procrastination in my life is like a scary monster that I try to avoid at all times. T. JanE ^^ Oh~Jane~~>> Correct I don\'t understand home work for today.>> I don\'t understand the homework for today. What role does procrastination play in your life?>> Correct Does it mean what role I don\'t want play in my life such as mother, wife, student and grandmother?>> Does it mean, what role don\'t I want to play in my life such as mother, wife, student, and grandmother?  Well, I was a child of my parents, and also I am a wife of my husband now.>> Correct On a second thought, I dinn\'t want to get married with someone. >> I didn\'t wan\'t to get married before.  I wanted to live alone. >> Correct I think I was afraid to be involved with someone forever as his wife and as my children\'s mother.>> Correct I don\'t want to be wrinkeld old woman now. >> I don\'t want to be a wrinkled old woman.  If it\'s possible. >> Correct But no one can go back in time.>> But no one can turn back time.  I think this question is for teenagers because they have many roles to play in their life. >> Correct

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