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What's the best advice you've gotten? First, Buy your clothes when the season comes. We have the four seasons, therfore we need clothes for every season. Sometimes I buy summer clothes in winter becase of big sales. But I feel wired when I wear the clothes in winter because of the clolor or texture. When I buy winter clothes in summer, I cannot help losing my sense of winter season. I recommend that you should buy your clothes when the season comes. Second, Study until you die. I've heard this advice form TV. We don't study after graduation from school unless we need to learn for making money. But our life is getting longer than before. It means that we need to work longer compared to the past. If we have to work longer for our extended life, education from school is not enough. We have to study until we cannot move for a better life Let's buy some winter clothes and let's study together!

Hi there, Ms. [이름]!Thank you for your composition! We can always study together, but it seems impossible for us to buy winter clothes together. Take care and talk to you later! T. JanE ^^ What\'s the best advice you\'ve gotten?>> Correct First, Buy your clothes when the season comes. >> Correct We have the four seasons, therfore we need clothes for every season. >> We have four seasons, therefore we need clothes for every season.  Sometimes I buy summer clothes in winter because of big sales.>> Correct But I feel wired when I wear the clothes in winter because of the clolor or texture. >> But I feel wierd when I wear the clothes in winter because of the color or texture.  When I buy winter clothes in summer, I cannot help losing my sense of winter season.>> Correct I recommend that you should buy your clothes when the season comes.>> I recommedn that you buy your clothes when the season comes. Second, study until you die.>> Correct I\'ve heard this advice from TV. >> Correct We don\'t study after graduation from school unless we need to learn for making money. >> We don\'t study after graduating from school, unless we need to learn further to make more money.  But our life is getting longer than before. >> Correct It means that we need to work longer compared to the past.>> Correct If we have to work longer for our extended life, education from school is not enough. >> Correct We have to study until we cannot move for a better life>> We have to study until we can move on to a better status in life.  Let\'s buy some winter clothes and let\'s study together! >> Correct