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Hello! Jessie!!
I considered English have to invest many time.
So I thought that I didn't English study.
However I am studying. ^^ Thought I am very slow.
That's OK!
I think high intelligence give a help people more attractive.
Because Intelligence means prime ability.
We can be improvement physical power a short time.
But Intelligence is spiritual heritage.
Intelligence don't have form, touch, smell.
So no matter how powerful people don't steal.
In that reason Intelligence will make people more attractive.
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Good morning [이름]!
I totally agree with your opinion.
Being intelligent makes a person more beautiful than other people.
Anyway, see you soon!
~T. Jessie~
Hello! Jessie!!
>> Correct!
I considered English have to invest many time.
>> I considered that I have to invest a lot of time in English.
So I thought that I didn\'t English study.
>> So I thought that I wouldn\'t study English.
However I am studying. ^^
>> However, I am studying right now.
Thought I am very slow.
>> Though I am very slow.
That\'s OK!
>> Correct!
I think high intelligence give a help people more attractive.
>> I think high intelligence makes people more attractive.
Because Intelligence means prime ability.
>> Because intelligence means prime ability.
We can be improvement physical power a short time.
>> We can improve our physical power for a short time.
But Intelligence is spiritual heritage.
>> But intelligence is a spiritual heritage.
Intelligence don\'t have form, touch, smell.
>> Intelligence doesn\'t have form, texture and smell.
So no matter how powerful people don\'t steal.
>> So no matter how powerful people are , they can\'t steal it.
In that reason Intelligence will make people more attractive.
>> For that reason, intelligence can make people more attractive.
I totally agree with your opinion.
Being intelligent makes a person more beautiful than other people.
Anyway, see you soon!
~T. Jessie~
Hello! Jessie!!
>> Correct!
I considered English have to invest many time.
>> I considered that I have to invest a lot of time in English.
So I thought that I didn\'t English study.
>> So I thought that I wouldn\'t study English.
However I am studying. ^^
>> However, I am studying right now.
Thought I am very slow.
>> Though I am very slow.
That\'s OK!
>> Correct!
I think high intelligence give a help people more attractive.
>> I think high intelligence makes people more attractive.
Because Intelligence means prime ability.
>> Because intelligence means prime ability.
We can be improvement physical power a short time.
>> We can improve our physical power for a short time.
But Intelligence is spiritual heritage.
>> But intelligence is a spiritual heritage.
Intelligence don\'t have form, touch, smell.
>> Intelligence doesn\'t have form, texture and smell.
So no matter how powerful people don\'t steal.
>> So no matter how powerful people are , they can\'t steal it.
In that reason Intelligence will make people more attractive.
>> For that reason, intelligence can make people more attractive.
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