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Would you consider getting a tattoo?
Yes,Of course, I really really want to get a tatto still.
But I cannot find tatto shop in here becuase tatto shop is illegal in korea.
If I want to have a tatto, I have to go to a clinic.
Isn't it funny? Doctor draws a tatto..
Anyway, I recall someone when I think tattoo.
I met a guy when I was in Newzealand, he has tattoos all his body even his fingers.
He always envied my body becase he regarded my body as a clean drawing paper.
He became a famous entertainer in Indonesia now.
If I have a tattoo, I want to get a samll yellow tulip on my wrist or waist.
I see my yellow tulip everyday. how nice it is!
I want to go straight to get a tattoo now!
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Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! You must really like this topic! Well, getting a tattoo was my dream when I was younger. Now, I don\'t really like it because I already know how tattoos are made.
T. JanE ^^
Would you consider getting a tattoo?>> Correct
Yes,Of course, I really really want to get a tatto still.>> Yes, of course! I still really want to get a tattoo.
But I cannot find tatto shop in here becuase tatto shop is illegal in korea.>> However, I cannot find any tattoo shop here in korea because it is illegal.
If I want to have a tattoo, I have to go to a clinic. >> Correct
Isn\'t it funny? Doctor draws a tattoo.. >> Correct
Anyway, I recall someone when I think tattoo.>> Anyway, I remember someone when I think about tattoos.
I met a guy when I was in Newzealand, he has tattoos all his body even his fingers.>> I met a guy when I was in New Zealand; he has tattoos all over his body, even on his fingers!
He always envied my body becase he regarded my body as a clean drawing paper.>> Correct
He became a famous entertainer in Indonesia now. >> He is a famous entertainer in Indonesia now.
If I have a tattoo, I want to get a samll yellow tulip on my wrist or waist.>> If I could get a tattoo, I would have a small yellow tulip on my wrist or waist.
I see my yellow tulip everyday.
>> I could see my yellow tulip everyday.
how nice it is!>> Correct
I want to go straight to get a tattoo now!
>> Correct
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