Home Work
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello. Jessie!
I suppress a sleepiness. I want to go to the home. ^^
Anyway let's talk about today homework.
I think relation is most important in life.
Life is very long.
Anybody don't lives alone.
We alyawys receive help from many people or animals and plants.
When I ate fruits, I receive for famer effort.
And My pets receive loves and make balanced mental.
Life means good luck.
Many people submit to attend every thing.
But I am not effort.
So We need to cherish in relationship.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thank you for sharing the lesson that you\'ve learnt.
Indeed, we have to cherish our relationships.
Please go over the corrections I noted.
I hope I got all your ideas correctly.
See you soon!
~T. Jessie~
Hello. Jessie!
>> Correct!
OR>> Hello Jessie!
I suppress a sleepiness.
>> I suppress sleepiness.
I want to go to the home. ^^
>> I want to go home. ^^
Anyway let\'s talk about today homework.
>> Anyway let\'s talk about today\'s homework.
I think relation is most important in life.
>> I think relationship is important in life.
Life is very long.
>> Correct!
Anybody don\'t lives alone.
>> Nobody lives alone.
We alyawys receive help from many people or animals and plants.
>> We always receive help from many people, animals and plants.
When I ate fruits, I receive for famer effort.
>> When I eat fruits, I receive the farmer\'s effort.
And My pets receive loves and make balanced mental.
>> Do you mean: And my pets receive love.
Life means good luck.
>> Correct!
Many people submit to attend every thing.
>> Do you mean: Many people exert effort to be able to have time for everything.
But I am not effort.
>> But I don\'t exert effort.
So We need to cherish in relationship.
>> So we need to cherish our relationships.
Thank you for sharing the lesson that you\'ve learnt.
Indeed, we have to cherish our relationships.
Please go over the corrections I noted.
I hope I got all your ideas correctly.
See you soon!
~T. Jessie~
Hello. Jessie!
>> Correct!
OR>> Hello Jessie!
I suppress a sleepiness.
>> I suppress sleepiness.
I want to go to the home. ^^
>> I want to go home. ^^
Anyway let\'s talk about today homework.
>> Anyway let\'s talk about today\'s homework.
I think relation is most important in life.
>> I think relationship is important in life.
Life is very long.
>> Correct!
Anybody don\'t lives alone.
>> Nobody lives alone.
We alyawys receive help from many people or animals and plants.
>> We always receive help from many people, animals and plants.
When I ate fruits, I receive for famer effort.
>> When I eat fruits, I receive the farmer\'s effort.
And My pets receive loves and make balanced mental.
>> Do you mean: And my pets receive love.
Life means good luck.
>> Correct!
Many people submit to attend every thing.
>> Do you mean: Many people exert effort to be able to have time for everything.
But I am not effort.
>> But I don\'t exert effort.
So We need to cherish in relationship.
>> So we need to cherish our relationships.
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