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Essay : Do you think Diets are effective? It helps me maintain a healthy weight. I want to keep to a healthy weight. so I usually work out a one-hour after finised my job. Many people who maintaing there's healthy worried about being overweight. Overweight is not just dangerous, it is expensive.

Hi there [이름]!^^ Thank you for the time to answer the homework!^ I think that it is a good goal to be fit and one way of doing that is to have an effective diet. But we have different body types so our diets should differ according to our lifestyle. T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: It helps me maintain a healthy weight.>> CORRECT OR> It helps me to be fit.I want to keep to a healthy weight. >> CORRECT OR> I want to be fit!^^so I usually work out a one-hour after finised my job.>> So I usually work out a one-hour after finishing with my job.Many people who maintaing there\'s healthy worried about being overweight.>> Many people who maintain their health are worried about being overweight.Overweight is not just dangerous, it is expensive. >>  Being overweight is not just dangerous, it is expensive.