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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello. Jessie!
I want to the sleep. My office and my work very lose. ^^
I'm search the internet.
Custom is similar convention, habit.
But custom add -s, customs means tariff.
I think that this sentence customs means convention.
So Let's talk about homework.
Umm.... Korea classroom has typical image.
In a low stand desks in a line , big screen and presentation.
Teacher take advantage of presentation.
Teacher make presentation use of picuter, sound and video.
Students see the screen.
Many Korea classroom is silence.
But as far as I know U.S students are good announcement.
They are easily talking about their opinion.
And teacher listen to express.
Also Many students freely reacts no matter what.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thanks for the effort [이름]!
It proves that you really want to learn.
I appreciate it when you do your best to study.
So keep on doing your best in everything.
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
Hello. Jessie!
>> Hello Jessie!
I want to the sleep.
>> I want to sleep.
My office and my work very lose. ^^
>> It\'s very lose here in my office and in my work.
OR>> I am not doing much today.
I\'m search the internet.
>> I searched the internet.
Custom is similar convention, habit.
>> Custom is similar with convention, habit.
But custom add -s, customs means tariff.
>> But if we add s to custom, it means tariff.
I think that this sentence customs means convention.
>> I think that the word customs in this sentence means convention.
So Let\'s talk about homework.
>> So let\'s talk about the homework.
Umm.... Korea classroom has typical image.
>> The classrooms in Korea have a typical image.
In a low stand desks in a line , big screen and presentation.
>> There are low stand desks in line, big screen and a presentation.
Teacher take advantage of presentation.
>> The teacher takes advantage of the presentation.
Teacher make presentation use of picuter, sound and video.
>> The teacher makes a presentation with the use of pictures, sound and video.
Students see the screen.
>> Students look at the screen.
Many Korea classroom is silence.
>> Many classrooms in Korea are silent.
But as far as I know U.S students are good announcement.
>> But as far as I know the students in the US are good at expressing themselves.
They are easily talking about their opinion.
>> They can easily talk about their opinion.
And teacher listen to express.
>> And the teacher listens to the students.
Also Many students freely reacts no matter what.
>> Also, many students react freely no matter what.
Thanks for the effort [이름]!
It proves that you really want to learn.
I appreciate it when you do your best to study.
So keep on doing your best in everything.
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
Hello. Jessie!
>> Hello Jessie!
I want to the sleep.
>> I want to sleep.
My office and my work very lose. ^^
>> It\'s very lose here in my office and in my work.
OR>> I am not doing much today.
I\'m search the internet.
>> I searched the internet.
Custom is similar convention, habit.
>> Custom is similar with convention, habit.
But custom add -s, customs means tariff.
>> But if we add s to custom, it means tariff.
I think that this sentence customs means convention.
>> I think that the word customs in this sentence means convention.
So Let\'s talk about homework.
>> So let\'s talk about the homework.
Umm.... Korea classroom has typical image.
>> The classrooms in Korea have a typical image.
In a low stand desks in a line , big screen and presentation.
>> There are low stand desks in line, big screen and a presentation.
Teacher take advantage of presentation.
>> The teacher takes advantage of the presentation.
Teacher make presentation use of picuter, sound and video.
>> The teacher makes a presentation with the use of pictures, sound and video.
Students see the screen.
>> Students look at the screen.
Many Korea classroom is silence.
>> Many classrooms in Korea are silent.
But as far as I know U.S students are good announcement.
>> But as far as I know the students in the US are good at expressing themselves.
They are easily talking about their opinion.
>> They can easily talk about their opinion.
And teacher listen to express.
>> And the teacher listens to the students.
Also Many students freely reacts no matter what.
>> Also, many students react freely no matter what.
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