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Hello Jessie.
I'm nearly falling sleep. I suppress sleep. It's very pain.
But...fighting!!
: Frankly speaking, I raised a pollution problem in my country.
Every night I have shampoo on my hair and do the dishes using
washing-up liquid.
Also When I wash the clothes, I use many laundry sopa.
I know that it is bad effect.
But many industrial product are necessities of life.
So Me and together efforts more less using new industrial product.
Using raise recycling.
And Develop environmental technology.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
I hope you can be more energetic today.^_^
Anyway, thanks for sharing those.
I believe that even if we just do simple things, it can still help our environment.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!
I\'m nearly falling sleep.
>> I nearly fell asleep.
I suppress sleep.
>> I suppress my sleepiness.
It\'s very pain.
>> It\'s very painful.
But...fighting!!
>> Correct!
OR>> But I can do it.
: Frankly speaking, I raised a pollution problem in my country.
>> Frankly speaking, I am raising the pollution problem in my country.
Every night I have shampoo on my hair and do the dishes using washing-up liquid.
>> Every night I use shampoo on my hair and do the dishes using liquid soap.
Also When I wash the clothes, I use many laundry sopa.
>> Also, when I wash the clothes, I use many laundry soap.
I know that it is bad effect.
>> I know that it has a bad effect.
But many industrial product are necessities of life.
>> But many industrial products are necessities in life.
So Me and together efforts more less using new industrial product.
>> Do you mean: So I will try to exert more effort not to use industrialized products.
Using raise recycling.
>> I will be using recycled materials.
And Develop environmental technology.
>> And develop environmental technology.
I hope you can be more energetic today.^_^
Anyway, thanks for sharing those.
I believe that even if we just do simple things, it can still help our environment.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!
I\'m nearly falling sleep.
>> I nearly fell asleep.
I suppress sleep.
>> I suppress my sleepiness.
It\'s very pain.
>> It\'s very painful.
But...fighting!!
>> Correct!
OR>> But I can do it.
: Frankly speaking, I raised a pollution problem in my country.
>> Frankly speaking, I am raising the pollution problem in my country.
Every night I have shampoo on my hair and do the dishes using washing-up liquid.
>> Every night I use shampoo on my hair and do the dishes using liquid soap.
Also When I wash the clothes, I use many laundry sopa.
>> Also, when I wash the clothes, I use many laundry soap.
I know that it is bad effect.
>> I know that it has a bad effect.
But many industrial product are necessities of life.
>> But many industrial products are necessities in life.
So Me and together efforts more less using new industrial product.
>> Do you mean: So I will try to exert more effort not to use industrialized products.
Using raise recycling.
>> I will be using recycled materials.
And Develop environmental technology.
>> And develop environmental technology.
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