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What is your opinion about, "It is not possible to eliminate poverty."? What could be the possible solutions? I disagree. I believe that it is possible to eliminate poverty. If we would save some money, we can do to eliminate poverty like me. When I was young, I was poor. So, after I grew up, I always saved some money and kept some money in the bank a long time. So, I can buy some clothes, a car and marry with my money. After I was married, I am trying to save money. In my opinion, if we would try to save money and keep money, we can do to eliminate poverty.

Hi [이름]! ^^ Chilly day! ^^ Thank you so much for making your homework. Well, you are right! We have to save money for our future use. Good thing, you started to save for your family. I salute you for that! ^^ By the way, please study the following corrections, okay. Have a good day ahead and take care always! ^^ ~~Teacher Kris I disagree. >> CorrectI believe that it is possible to eliminate poverty. >> CorrectIf we would save some money, we can do to eliminate poverty like me. >> If we save money, we can eliminate poverty just like me.When I was young, I was poor. >> Correct So, after I grew up, I always saved some money and kept some money in the bank a long time. >> So, when I grew up, I saved money and kept my money in the bank for a long time.So, I can buy some clothes, a car and marry with my money. >> CorrectAfter I was married, I am trying to save money. >> When I got married, I started to save money.In my opinion, if we would try to save money and keep money, we can do to eliminate poverty. >> In my opinion, if we would try to save money and keep money, we can eliminate poverty.