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Hello Jessie.
Thanks for your advice about study English grammar.
When I go to the bookstore, I will take a easy English book or short story.^^
Well... After finished the class, I checked my mistake.
But I can't remember to tomorrow. ::
Ha Ha... Anyway let's talk about homework.
I experienced to gain weight. When I get stress during the work, I have great appetite.
So I eat chocolate, bread, cracker.. etc.
The problem is overeating and late-night meal.
For that reason I get up weight.
And weight give stress for me.
Then I repeat appetite.
But I get serious stress, I walk in anywhere and drop sweat and full-throate sing.
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Thanks for considering my suggestion.
It only shows that you really are eager to be a better English speaker.
Well, you have to try ways on how you can remember your errors so you won\'t repeat it.
Anyway, I also eat a lot when I\'m stressed so I\'m fat already. huhuhu=(
But I don\'t sing loudly because I don\'t have a beautiful voice. hahha
I hope I can hear you sing someday.
Then, see you later!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!
Thanks for your advice about study English grammar.
>> Thanks for your advice about studying English grammar.
When I go to the bookstore, I will take a easy English book or short story.^^
>> When I go to a bookstore, I will take an easy English book or short story.^^
Well... After finished the class, I checked my mistake.
>> Well, after we finished the class, I checked my mistake.
OR>> Well, I always check my mistakes after our class.
But I can\'t remember to tomorrow. ::
>> But I can\'t remember next day. ::
Ha Ha... Anyway let\'s talk about homework.
>> Ha Ha... Anyway let\'s talk about the homework.
I experienced to gain weight.
>> I experienced gaining weight.
When I get stress during the work, I have great appetite.
>> When I get stress at work, I have great appetite.
So I eat chocolate, bread, cracker.. etc.
>> Correct!
The problem is overeating and late-night meal.
>> The problems are overeating and late-night meals.
For that reason I get up weight.
>> For that reason my weight increased.
And weight give stress for me.
>> And my weight stresses me out.
Then I repeat appetite.
>> So once again, I eat a lot.
But I get serious stress, I walk in anywhere and drop sweat and full-throate sing.
>> But when I am seriously stressed, I walk anywhere to sweat and I also sing loudly.
Thanks for considering my suggestion.
It only shows that you really are eager to be a better English speaker.
Well, you have to try ways on how you can remember your errors so you won\'t repeat it.
Anyway, I also eat a lot when I\'m stressed so I\'m fat already. huhuhu=(
But I don\'t sing loudly because I don\'t have a beautiful voice. hahha
I hope I can hear you sing someday.
Then, see you later!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!
Thanks for your advice about study English grammar.
>> Thanks for your advice about studying English grammar.
When I go to the bookstore, I will take a easy English book or short story.^^
>> When I go to a bookstore, I will take an easy English book or short story.^^
Well... After finished the class, I checked my mistake.
>> Well, after we finished the class, I checked my mistake.
OR>> Well, I always check my mistakes after our class.
But I can\'t remember to tomorrow. ::
>> But I can\'t remember next day. ::
Ha Ha... Anyway let\'s talk about homework.
>> Ha Ha... Anyway let\'s talk about the homework.
I experienced to gain weight.
>> I experienced gaining weight.
When I get stress during the work, I have great appetite.
>> When I get stress at work, I have great appetite.
So I eat chocolate, bread, cracker.. etc.
>> Correct!
The problem is overeating and late-night meal.
>> The problems are overeating and late-night meals.
For that reason I get up weight.
>> For that reason my weight increased.
And weight give stress for me.
>> And my weight stresses me out.
Then I repeat appetite.
>> So once again, I eat a lot.
But I get serious stress, I walk in anywhere and drop sweat and full-throate sing.
>> But when I am seriously stressed, I walk anywhere to sweat and I also sing loudly.
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