Home Work
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Jessie.
Wow... Today homework very difficult.
Because I lack training.
I guess my sentence is wrong answer. haha..
1. The storm violently rocked the ship.
2. The artist painstakingly worked at his masterpice.
3. The firm offered a free gift by dad.
4. I had been read the paper that the burglar caught in.
5. At the nightfall, cricketers began. Thrir calls piercing.
6. He wore a hat on his head made of coconut fiber.
7. Coffe is very populor many part of the world.
8. They could not explore the cave without a torch.
9. The shed was damaged during the storm.
10. The dog sat himself next to James talking.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thanks for still trying.
You were still able to create good sentences so you better keep on practicing.
It will take time but I know that in time, you will be better and better.
Enjoy the rest of the night my dear [이름]!
See you!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.>> Correct!
Wow... Today homework very difficult.
Wow... Today homework very difficult.
>> Wow! Today\'s homework is very difficult.
Because I lack training.
Because I lack training.
>> Correct!
I guess my sentence is wrong answer. haha..
>> I guess my sentences are wrong.
1. The storm violently rocked the ship.
I guess my sentence is wrong answer. haha..
>> I guess my sentences are wrong.
1. The storm violently rocked the ship.
>> Correct!
OR>> The storm rocked the ship violently.
2. The artist painstakingly worked at his masterpice.
2. The artist painstakingly worked at his masterpice.
>> Correct!
OR>> The artist painstakingly worked at his masterpiece
3. The firm offered a free gift by dad.
>> Dad was offered a free gift by the firm.
4. I had been read the paper that the burglar caught in.
4. I had been read the paper that the burglar caught in.
>> I read in the paper that the burglar had been caught.
5. At the nightfall, cricketers began. Thrir calls piercing.
5. At the nightfall, cricketers began. Thrir calls piercing.
>> The cricketers began their piercing calls at nightfall.
6. He wore a hat on his head made of coconut fiber.
6. He wore a hat on his head made of coconut fiber.
>> He wore a hat made of coconut fiber on his head.
7. Coffe is very populor many part of the world.
7. Coffe is very populor many part of the world.
>> Coffee is very popular in many parts of the world.
8. They could not explore the cave without a torch.
8. They could not explore the cave without a torch.
>> Correct!
9. The shed was damaged during the storm.
9. The shed was damaged during the storm.
>> Correct!
10. The dog sat himself next to James talking.
10. The dog sat himself next to James talking.
>> James sat next to the dog talking to himself.
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