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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Jessie.
I remembered something special.
I gave watch for my boyfriend on last Sunday.
It's little excessive spending.
But I am very glad. And I request to my boyfriend special Christmas present.
I am expecting.^^ ha ha ha..
Anyway let's talk about homework.
I deprecate cloning.
Many scientist study deep into clone.
Whereupon News, radio, newspaper coverage animal clone success like to pig and dog.
Before Long times I receive a report about clone, I feel surprise but not welcome.
I think scientist finally wants human cloning.
If succeed in human cloning we lose the sanctity of life.
My mother and father are priceless existence. Because They are only one.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Wow! I think your boyfriend loves your present.
I hope he gives you a necklace.^_^
Tell me about it.^_^
Anyway, you gave wonderful ideas about our topic.
Thanks for sharing them
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!
I remembered something special.
>> Correct!
I gave watch for my boyfriend on last Sunday.
>> I gave a watch to my boyfriend last Sunday.
It\'s little excessive spending.
>> It\'s a little excessive spending.
But I am very glad.
>> Correct!
And I request to my boyfriend special Christmas present.
>> And I requested a special Christmas present from my boyfriend.
I am expecting.^^ ha ha ha..
>> Correct!
Anyway let\'s talk about homework.
>> Anyway let\'s talk about the homework.
I deprecate cloning.
>> Correct!
Many scientist study deep into clone.
>> Many scientists study cloning deeply.
Whereupon News, radio, newspaper coverage animal clone success like to pig and dog.
>> Whereupon news, radio, newspaper covered the successful cloning of pig and dog.
Before Long times I receive a report about clone, I feel surprise but not welcome.
>> Long time ago, I received a report about cloning, I was surprised but I didn\'t welcome it.
I think scientist finally wants human cloning.
>> I think scientists finally want to clone human.
If succeed in human cloning we lose the sanctity of life.
>> If they succeed in cloning human, we will lose the sanctity of life.
My mother and father are priceless existence.
>> Correct!
Because They are only one.
>> Because they are only one.
Wow! I think your boyfriend loves your present.
I hope he gives you a necklace.^_^
Tell me about it.^_^
Anyway, you gave wonderful ideas about our topic.
Thanks for sharing them
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!
I remembered something special.
>> Correct!
I gave watch for my boyfriend on last Sunday.
>> I gave a watch to my boyfriend last Sunday.
It\'s little excessive spending.
>> It\'s a little excessive spending.
But I am very glad.
>> Correct!
And I request to my boyfriend special Christmas present.
>> And I requested a special Christmas present from my boyfriend.
I am expecting.^^ ha ha ha..
>> Correct!
Anyway let\'s talk about homework.
>> Anyway let\'s talk about the homework.
I deprecate cloning.
>> Correct!
Many scientist study deep into clone.
>> Many scientists study cloning deeply.
Whereupon News, radio, newspaper coverage animal clone success like to pig and dog.
>> Whereupon news, radio, newspaper covered the successful cloning of pig and dog.
Before Long times I receive a report about clone, I feel surprise but not welcome.
>> Long time ago, I received a report about cloning, I was surprised but I didn\'t welcome it.
I think scientist finally wants human cloning.
>> I think scientists finally want to clone human.
If succeed in human cloning we lose the sanctity of life.
>> If they succeed in cloning human, we will lose the sanctity of life.
My mother and father are priceless existence.
>> Correct!
Because They are only one.
>> Because they are only one.
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