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Hi Jessie.
I want quickly weekend. Because I have stress. ha ha ha
I ate lunch overeating, so l'm very sleepiness.
Anyway...
Well.. I think stress harmful to mind and body.
Stress is sign of body.
When l had stress, I thought my body and mind demanded rest.
Usually many people have problem, financial worry and hard work.
Then they feels fatigue and stress. They need a holiday.
Korea suicide rate is number one position of OECD.
I think high stress cause suicidal impulse.
Student have academic stress and adult have debt.
I hope not pressure stress but happiness.
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Hi there!
Don\'t eat too much because you might be stressed with your body. ^_^haha
Anyway, thanks for sharing your opinion about stress.
I corrected your sentences but I\'m not quite sure if I got all your ideas correctly.
Well, see you tomorrow! Smile!
~T. Jessie~
Hi Jessie.
>> Correct!
I want quickly weekend.
>> I want the weekend to come quickly.
OR>> I hope it\'s already weekend.
Because I have stress. ha ha ha
>> Because I am stress.
I ate lunch overeating, so l\'m very sleepiness.
>> I overate at lunch so I\'m very sleepy.
Anyway...
>> Correct!
Well.. I think stress harmful to mind and body.
>> Well, I think stress is harmful to the mind and body.
Stress is sign of body.
>> Do you mean: Stress affects our body.
When l had stress, I thought my body and mind demanded rest.
>> Correct!
OR>> When l am stressed, I thought that my body and my mind demanded rest.
Usually many people have problem, financial worry and hard work.
>> Usually many people have problems, financial worries and hard work.
Then they feels fatigue and stress.
>> Then they feel fatigue and stress.
They need a holiday.
>> Correct!
Korea suicide rate is number one position of OECD.
>> Korea\'s suicide rate is number one in OECD.
I think high stress cause suicidal impulse.
>> Correct!
Student have academic stress and adult have debt.
>> Students have academic stress and adults have debt.
I hope not pressure stress but happiness.
>> I hope not to be pressured by stress but by happiness.
Don\'t eat too much because you might be stressed with your body. ^_^haha
Anyway, thanks for sharing your opinion about stress.
I corrected your sentences but I\'m not quite sure if I got all your ideas correctly.
Well, see you tomorrow! Smile!
~T. Jessie~
Hi Jessie.
>> Correct!
I want quickly weekend.
>> I want the weekend to come quickly.
OR>> I hope it\'s already weekend.
Because I have stress. ha ha ha
>> Because I am stress.
I ate lunch overeating, so l\'m very sleepiness.
>> I overate at lunch so I\'m very sleepy.
Anyway...
>> Correct!
Well.. I think stress harmful to mind and body.
>> Well, I think stress is harmful to the mind and body.
Stress is sign of body.
>> Do you mean: Stress affects our body.
When l had stress, I thought my body and mind demanded rest.
>> Correct!
OR>> When l am stressed, I thought that my body and my mind demanded rest.
Usually many people have problem, financial worry and hard work.
>> Usually many people have problems, financial worries and hard work.
Then they feels fatigue and stress.
>> Then they feel fatigue and stress.
They need a holiday.
>> Correct!
Korea suicide rate is number one position of OECD.
>> Korea\'s suicide rate is number one in OECD.
I think high stress cause suicidal impulse.
>> Correct!
Student have academic stress and adult have debt.
>> Students have academic stress and adults have debt.
I hope not pressure stress but happiness.
>> I hope not to be pressured by stress but by happiness.
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