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Hello Jessie.
umm.. Today homework is bitter topic.
Because I easily recollect distressed thing than great days.
So I realize happy emotion quickly drop from memory.
Well... Two years ago, I got the phone from writer teacher.
She said, "Did you working together?"
writing is fun. Usually I watched the TV and movie theater.
But now I dream of writer.
If I miss the call, I lives different life.
I am satisfied the present.
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Hi there [이름]!
Thanks for sharing this to me.
I don\'t quite understand it. Maybe you can tell me more about it later.
Well, for now, let\'s create happy moments for you to remember so you won\'t just think of the distressful things. ^_^
Be happy and be positive [이름]!
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!
umm.. Today homework is bitter topic.
>> Today\'s homework is a bitter topic.
Because I easily recollect distressed thing than great days.
>> Because I can easily recollect distressful things than great days.
So I realize happy emotion quickly drop from memory.
>> So I realize that happiness quickly drops from my memory.
Well... Two years ago, I got the phone from writer teacher.
>> Well, two years ago, I got a phone from my writing teacher.
OR>> Well, two years ago, I received a call from my writing teacher.
She said, \"Did you working together?\"
>> She said, \"Did you work together?\"
writing is fun.
>> Writing is fun.
Usually I watched the TV and movie theater.
>> I usually watched TV and went to the movie theater.
But now I dream of writer.
>> But now I dream to be a writer.
If I miss the call, I lives different life.
>> If I missed the call, I would have lived a different life.
I am satisfied the present.
>> I am satisfied with the present.
Thanks for sharing this to me.
I don\'t quite understand it. Maybe you can tell me more about it later.
Well, for now, let\'s create happy moments for you to remember so you won\'t just think of the distressful things. ^_^
Be happy and be positive [이름]!
See you later!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!
umm.. Today homework is bitter topic.
>> Today\'s homework is a bitter topic.
Because I easily recollect distressed thing than great days.
>> Because I can easily recollect distressful things than great days.
So I realize happy emotion quickly drop from memory.
>> So I realize that happiness quickly drops from my memory.
Well... Two years ago, I got the phone from writer teacher.
>> Well, two years ago, I got a phone from my writing teacher.
OR>> Well, two years ago, I received a call from my writing teacher.
She said, \"Did you working together?\"
>> She said, \"Did you work together?\"
writing is fun.
>> Writing is fun.
Usually I watched the TV and movie theater.
>> I usually watched TV and went to the movie theater.
But now I dream of writer.
>> But now I dream to be a writer.
If I miss the call, I lives different life.
>> If I missed the call, I would have lived a different life.
I am satisfied the present.
>> I am satisfied with the present.
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