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My dear Jessie.
I like today IDOM. I love boyfriend to distraction.
But I don't know that he will be my husband. haha
Because many Copley break up after a long time.
I have been learned K-POP dance for three month at twenty-two years old
with my friend. We released stress. But i am bad dancer. hee-hee.
If I can learn on thing. I learn swimming.
Because I don't know swimming. So I went to swimming pool in hotel.
I could'nt go swimming.
I just debbled my foot. But I can't learn swim. I don't have ample money.
hee-hee. Next time, I will go swimming pool. I am bored. ^^
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Hi there [이름]!
Good to hear that. I hope you can make use of the words and idioms that I am placing on your page.
Anyway, don\'t worry too much because I also don\'t know how to swim. ^_^
But I hope you can have time to learn how to.
Good luck on that!
See you!
~T. Jessie~
My dear Jessie.
>> Correct!
I like today IDOM.
>> I like today\'s idiom.
I love boyfriend to distraction.
>> I love my boyfriend to distraction.
But I don\'t know that he will be my husband. haha
>> But I don\'t know if he will be my husband. haha
Because many Copley break up after a long time.
>> Because many couples break up after a long time.
I have been learned K-POP dance for three month at twenty-two years old with my friend.
>> I have learned K-POP dance for three months when I was twenty-two years old with my friend.
OR>> When I was twenty-two years old, I learned K-POP dance for three months with my friend.
We released stress.
>> Correct!
But i am bad dancer. hee-hee.
>> But I am a bad dancer. hee-hee.
If I can learn on thing.
>> If I can learn one thing, I would learn how to swim.
I learn swimming.
>> If I can learn one thing, I would learn how to swim.
Because I don\'t know swimming.
>> Because I don\'t know how to swim.
So I went to swimming pool in hotel.
>> So when I went to the swimming pool of a hotel.
I could\'nt go swimming.
>> I couldn\'t swim.
I just debbled my foot.
>> I just dabbled my foot.
But I can\'t learn swim.
>> But I can\'t learn how to swim.
I don\'t have ample money.hee-hee.
>> Correct!
Next time, I will go swimming pool.
>> Next time, I will go to a swimming pool.
I am bored. ^^
>> Correct!
Good to hear that. I hope you can make use of the words and idioms that I am placing on your page.
Anyway, don\'t worry too much because I also don\'t know how to swim. ^_^
But I hope you can have time to learn how to.
Good luck on that!
See you!
~T. Jessie~
My dear Jessie.
>> Correct!
I like today IDOM.
>> I like today\'s idiom.
I love boyfriend to distraction.
>> I love my boyfriend to distraction.
But I don\'t know that he will be my husband. haha
>> But I don\'t know if he will be my husband. haha
Because many Copley break up after a long time.
>> Because many couples break up after a long time.
I have been learned K-POP dance for three month at twenty-two years old with my friend.
>> I have learned K-POP dance for three months when I was twenty-two years old with my friend.
OR>> When I was twenty-two years old, I learned K-POP dance for three months with my friend.
We released stress.
>> Correct!
But i am bad dancer. hee-hee.
>> But I am a bad dancer. hee-hee.
If I can learn on thing.
>> If I can learn one thing, I would learn how to swim.
I learn swimming.
>> If I can learn one thing, I would learn how to swim.
Because I don\'t know swimming.
>> Because I don\'t know how to swim.
So I went to swimming pool in hotel.
>> So when I went to the swimming pool of a hotel.
I could\'nt go swimming.
>> I couldn\'t swim.
I just debbled my foot.
>> I just dabbled my foot.
But I can\'t learn swim.
>> But I can\'t learn how to swim.
I don\'t have ample money.hee-hee.
>> Correct!
Next time, I will go swimming pool.
>> Next time, I will go to a swimming pool.
I am bored. ^^
>> Correct!
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