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Thank you. Jessie.
You hear to my concern and give advice.
I'm consoled. Honestly I can't concentrate my mind.
I am disappointed to been friend for six years.
Anyway I keep courage. haha ^^
Umm..... I think that the most serious problem is water shortage in the world.
A few days ago I watched documentary about California serious water shortage.
Water shortage cause climate change.
People distribute the water. They don't enough water.
So they don't harvest almond and rear cattle.
And they pay a fine to excess water.
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Hello there [이름]!
Thanks for sharing your opinion about the most serious problem.
Anyway, just remember that I am always here for you.
Well, we better enjoy this day and let\'s talk again tomorrow.
See you!
~T. Jessie~
Thank you. Jessie.
>> Thank you Jessie.
You hear to my concern and give advice.
>> You listened to my concern and gave advice.
I\'m consoled.
>> Correct!
Honestly I can\'t concentrate my mind.
>> Honestly I can\'t concentrate.
I am disappointed to been friend for six years.
>> I am disappointed of my friend for six years.
Anyway I keep courage. haha ^^
>> Anyway I will be courageous. haha ^^
Umm..... I think that the most serious problem is water shortage in the world.
>> Correct!
A few days ago I watched documentary about California serious water shortage.
>> A few days ago, I watched a documentary film about California\'s serious water shortage.
Water shortage cause climate change.
>> Water shortage causes climate change.
People distribute the water.
>> People distribute water.
They don\'t enough water.
>> They don\'t have enough water.
So they don\'t harvest almond and rear cattle.
>> So they can\'t harvest almond and rear cattle.
And they pay a fine to excess water.
>> And they pay a fine for excess water.
Thanks for sharing your opinion about the most serious problem.
Anyway, just remember that I am always here for you.
Well, we better enjoy this day and let\'s talk again tomorrow.
See you!
~T. Jessie~
Thank you. Jessie.
>> Thank you Jessie.
You hear to my concern and give advice.
>> You listened to my concern and gave advice.
I\'m consoled.
>> Correct!
Honestly I can\'t concentrate my mind.
>> Honestly I can\'t concentrate.
I am disappointed to been friend for six years.
>> I am disappointed of my friend for six years.
Anyway I keep courage. haha ^^
>> Anyway I will be courageous. haha ^^
Umm..... I think that the most serious problem is water shortage in the world.
>> Correct!
A few days ago I watched documentary about California serious water shortage.
>> A few days ago, I watched a documentary film about California\'s serious water shortage.
Water shortage cause climate change.
>> Water shortage causes climate change.
People distribute the water.
>> People distribute water.
They don\'t enough water.
>> They don\'t have enough water.
So they don\'t harvest almond and rear cattle.
>> So they can\'t harvest almond and rear cattle.
And they pay a fine to excess water.
>> And they pay a fine for excess water.
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