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Hello Jessie.
I like English. Because I can understand what is meaning.
So me and you can fan the breeze.
Naturally, I repeat mistakes, haha ^^::
Umm... I hope the many money. Best present is money.
I want a lot of things. I can't choice only one. haw-haw.
If I receive many money., I will buy desideratum.
First, I will eat world food. Second, I will go world tour.
Jessie~ We will meet Philippines.^^
Third, I will make my fantastial garden here and there.
Happy Christmas~ See you.
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Hi there!
Thanks for sharing this to me. I do hope that you will receive a lot of money.
So that we could finally meet! Hahaha^_^
I also hope I can receive a lot of money.
Well, let\'s hope for that.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!
I like English.
>> Correct!
Because I can understand what is meaning.
>> Because I can understand the meaning.
So me and you can fan the breeze.
>> So you and I can fan the breeze.
Naturally, I repeat mistakes, haha ^^::
>> Correct!
Umm... I hope the many money.
>> I hope to receive many money.
Best present is money.
>> The best present is money.
I want a lot of things.
>> Correct!
I can\'t choice only one. haw-haw.
>> I can\'t choose only one. haw-haw.
If I receive many money., I will buy desideratum.
>> Correct!
First, I will eat world food.
>> First, I will eat different food around the world.
Second, I will go world tour.
>> Second, I will have a world tour.
Jessie~ We will meet Philippines.^^
>> Jessie, we will meet in the Philippines.^^
Third, I will make my fantastial garden here and there.
>> Third, I will make my fantastic garden here and there.
Happy Christmas~ See you.
>> Correct!
Thanks for sharing this to me. I do hope that you will receive a lot of money.
So that we could finally meet! Hahaha^_^
I also hope I can receive a lot of money.
Well, let\'s hope for that.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!
I like English.
>> Correct!
Because I can understand what is meaning.
>> Because I can understand the meaning.
So me and you can fan the breeze.
>> So you and I can fan the breeze.
Naturally, I repeat mistakes, haha ^^::
>> Correct!
Umm... I hope the many money.
>> I hope to receive many money.
Best present is money.
>> The best present is money.
I want a lot of things.
>> Correct!
I can\'t choice only one. haw-haw.
>> I can\'t choose only one. haw-haw.
If I receive many money., I will buy desideratum.
>> Correct!
First, I will eat world food.
>> First, I will eat different food around the world.
Second, I will go world tour.
>> Second, I will have a world tour.
Jessie~ We will meet Philippines.^^
>> Jessie, we will meet in the Philippines.^^
Third, I will make my fantastial garden here and there.
>> Third, I will make my fantastic garden here and there.
Happy Christmas~ See you.
>> Correct!
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