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2014-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Hi Erine ^^ I miss my class. I am sorry. I didn't compleately realize calling. I might be too old. ------------------------ I don't think so. Because I already know that is a just dream. There is no cozy place just like home. It is not different in case of country. I heard many immigrated people live hard life. They have chores job. Their life quality are poor. They are not good at speaking English. A few people succeed in American dream. So, I don't want to go there to live. I just want to a trip.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

Thank you so much for having a class with me and for not forgetting our class time.^^

I had a great time knowing your answers in the questions during our class time.^.^

~~Teacher Erine~~

Hi Erine ^^

>>Correct.

I miss my class.

>> I missed my class.

I am sorry.

>> I am sorry.

I didn\'t compleately realize calling.

>> I didn\'t completely realize that you were calling.
I might be too old.

>> Correct.
------------------------
I don\'t think so.

>> Correct.
Because I already know that is a just dream.

>> Because I already know that it is just a dream.
There is no cozy place just like home.

>> Correct.
It is not different in case of country.

>> It is not different in case of my country.
I heard many immigrated people live hard life.

>> I heard that people immigrated live a hard life.
They have chores job.

>> They have jobs to do.

Their life quality are poor.

>> Their quality of life is poor.
They are not good at speaking English.

>> Correct.
A few people succeed in American dream.

>> A few people succeeded in the American dream.
So, I don\'t want to go there to live.

>> Correct.

I just want to a trip.

>> I just want to go on a trip.

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