Home work
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Erine^^ I don't know that you gave me a homework.
Because I skipped the class. I didn't visit the homepage.
I just stop by clicking the last class. You stil did your job for me.
Thank you for your sincere your attitude.
We cannot limit the problems to schools or parents.
We need to think the original reasons.
If we loved each other just like love myself, we never bully others.
School and parents should teach it our children.
The most important thing is to educate right personality.
That is our real duties for our children.
강사 첨삭
This is the second homework I checked today, [이름]!
I noticed that I wasn\'t able to give you a grammar type of homework so I will be providing it today.
If you have questions, feel free to ask me in class.
Have a wonderful day ahead!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi Erine^^ I don\'t know that you gave me a homework.~~Teacher Erine~~
>> Hi, Erine. I didn\'t know that you gave me a homework.
Because I skipped the class. I didn\'t visit the homepage.
Because I skipped the class. I didn\'t visit the homepage.
>>Because I skipped the class, I didn\'t visit the homepage.
I just stop by clicking the last class.
>>I just clicked and checked the last class.
You stil did your job for me.
>>You still did your job for me.
Thank you for your sincere your attitude.
Thank you for your sincere your attitude.
>>Thank you for your sincerity.
We cannot limit the problems to schools or parents.
We cannot limit the problems to schools or parents.
>>We cannot limit the problems in schools or parents.
We need to think the original reasons.
We need to think the original reasons.
>>We need to think about the main reasons.
If we loved each other just like love myself, we never bully others.
If we loved each other just like love myself, we never bully others.
>> If we love other people just as we love ourselves, we should never bully others.
School and parents should teach it our children.
School and parents should teach it our children.
>>The school and parents should teach it to the children.
The most important thing is to educate right personality.
The most important thing is to educate right personality.
>>The most important thing is to educate the right personality.
That is our real duties for our children.
That is our real duties for our children.
>>This is our real duties to our children.
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