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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Jessie.
Today, I'm tired.
Korean called "Monday illness"
After long holiday, Many people and me feel fatigue.
I want to go my house. haha.
Last year, I think my every life was lazy.
I promised myself to again assistant writer.
But I didn't action.
So I will get up more early in the morning.
And I will write little by little.
Second I want physical strength and nice body.
I have to exercise. But I Know that I succumb to cracker temptation.
Third I want to go to the oversea trip.
Then I will save little money and make free time. ^^
Happy New Year!!
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
I hope that you can attain your goals.
You can actually write it down and put it beside your bed so you could always remember it. ^_^
Anyway, please go over the corrections I noted. I commend you for using good vocabularies.
I hope you can always remember them and I hope you can also use it as you speak.
See you soon!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!
Today, I\'m tired.
>> Correct!
Korean called \"Monday illness\"
>> Koreans call it \"Monday illness\"
After long holiday, Many people and me feel fatigue.
>> After a long holiday, many people, including me feel fatigue.
I want to go my house. haha.
>> I want to go to my house. haha.
Last year, I think my every life was lazy.
>> Last year, I think I was lazy.
I promised myself to again assistant writer.
>> I promised myself to be an assistant writer again.
But I didn\'t action.
>> But I didn\'t act.
So I will get up more early in the morning.
>> So I will get up earlier in the morning.
And I will write little by little.
>> Correct!
Second I want physical strength and nice body.
>> Second I want physical strength and a nice body.
I have to exercise.
>> Correct!
But I Know that I succumb to cracker temptation.
>> But I know that I succumb to cracker temptation.
Third I want to go to the oversea trip.
>> Third I want to go to an overseas trip.
Then I will save little money and make free time. ^^
>> Correct!
Happy New Year!!
>> Correct!
I hope that you can attain your goals.
You can actually write it down and put it beside your bed so you could always remember it. ^_^
Anyway, please go over the corrections I noted. I commend you for using good vocabularies.
I hope you can always remember them and I hope you can also use it as you speak.
See you soon!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!
Today, I\'m tired.
>> Correct!
Korean called \"Monday illness\"
>> Koreans call it \"Monday illness\"
After long holiday, Many people and me feel fatigue.
>> After a long holiday, many people, including me feel fatigue.
I want to go my house. haha.
>> I want to go to my house. haha.
Last year, I think my every life was lazy.
>> Last year, I think I was lazy.
I promised myself to again assistant writer.
>> I promised myself to be an assistant writer again.
But I didn\'t action.
>> But I didn\'t act.
So I will get up more early in the morning.
>> So I will get up earlier in the morning.
And I will write little by little.
>> Correct!
Second I want physical strength and nice body.
>> Second I want physical strength and a nice body.
I have to exercise.
>> Correct!
But I Know that I succumb to cracker temptation.
>> But I know that I succumb to cracker temptation.
Third I want to go to the oversea trip.
>> Third I want to go to an overseas trip.
Then I will save little money and make free time. ^^
>> Correct!
Happy New Year!!
>> Correct!
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