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2015-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello Jessie. Today is special day.^^ It transpire that today is firist tuesday of 2015. Umm... Anyway I think weird korea food is Sliced Raw Skate. It is called "hong-ah" This food is made ferment skate. People put skate in the pot. Then they are wait. Skate rot slowly. This food smell rotten egges, vinegar and color is drrk yellow or pink. If Jessie eat sliced skate, you have difficulty in breathin. But many people like Sliced Raw Skate. umm,, I hate this food. haha

강사 첨삭

Hi there!
Thanks for sharing this.
I\'ve heard about this Korean food but I don\'t want to taste it.hahaha
Have you tasted it?
I hope you can also describe the taste. ^_^
Maybe you can tell me about that tomorrow.
Enjoy the rest of the day!
~T. Jessie~
Hello Jessie.
>> Correct!
Today is special day.^^
>> Today is a special day.^^
It transpire that today is firist tuesday of 2015.
>> It transpires that today is the first Tuesday of 2015.
Umm... Anyway I think weird korea food is Sliced Raw Skate.
>> Umm... Anyway, I think the weirdest Korean food is Sliced Raw Skate.
It is called \"hong-ah\"
>> Correct!
This food is made ferment skate.
>> This food is a fermented skate.
People put skate in the pot.
>> Correct!
Then they are wait.
>> Then they wait.
Skate rot slowly.
>> Skates rot slowly.
This food smell rotten egges, vinegar and color is drrk yellow or pink.
>> This food smells like rotten eggs, vinegar and the color is dark yellow or pink.
If Jessie eat sliced skate, you have difficulty in breathin.
>> If Jessie eats sliced skate, you will have difficulty breathing.
But many people like Sliced Raw Skate.
>> Correct!
umm,, I hate this food. haha
>> Correct!

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